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Meeting

Grandma's advice for the love lorn.

17 total reviews 
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Exceptional
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OMG! Damn you, Gretchen Hargis! I am sitting here with my mascara tracking down my cheeks, and it's all because you write the BEST freaking old-fashioned-just-plain-good stories!! I could read this kind of offering all night long. I LOVE your style. It is so warm and honest and no-nonsense, steeped in love and wisdom and common sense brilliance.

You are such a favorite of mine!!

This was a FANTASTIC read. Thank you!!
xoxoxoxo

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 15-Jul-2023
    If I make it to the big time, I'll send you smudge proof mascara. Lol. Glad you got the feels from this. Thanks so much for stars and especially the kind words. Gretchen
reply by Rachelle Allen on 15-Jul-2023
    Always my pleasure.
reply by Rachelle Allen on 15-Jul-2023
    I'm holding you to that. That's like $30/tube!!
Comment from Sanku
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We say that if one door ccloses, nine doors will open...may be that is a bit too much.But there would surely another brgining .Thank you for sharing this heart warming story...

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2023
    Thank you so much. I appreciate it. Gretchen
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
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This was a heartwarming story that showed how the same trials follow people on through the generations. What a shame we don't know how to communicate better to share our experiences. A lot of heartache could so easily be eased. kay

 Comment Written 14-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 14-Jul-2023
    Thanks so much , Kay. I appreciate your review and nice comments. Gretchen
Comment from walk.write.reflect
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A heartwarming and inspiring story that seamlessly weaves together emotions, characters, and a profound message. As I followed the characters on their emotional journey, I couldn't help but reflect on my own life and feel inspired. Thank you for sharing this beautiful story. It truly made my day. Best Regards.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
    Thank you for this sweet review. Gretchen
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is an endearing story Gretchen and I hung onto your every word and wise advice here. Plenty of fish in the sea comes to mind, but it is hard when you are yearning for just one man. When it comes to the heart we can easily be hurt. After my husband died I fell for someone who caused me some heartache and even later in life you can still have the same feelings as when you are young. I got over it and moved on, but it is not easy. I knew he didn't care for me like I cared for him and that thought got me through it. A fine post Gretchen, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
    Thank you for this awesome review and for the personal experience. Gretchen
Comment from Lisasview
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As they say when one door closes another one opens... And your story expresses tat so well.
Life goes on and on....
Really likes your story... Is it up for a contest?
Lisasview, new to this site

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
    Thank you, Lisa. I appreciate this and no, not for a contest. Gretchen
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I know he's out there too. Thank you for sharing this story with us. I enjoyed reading and can't find anyway to improve it.

You need a man who will make you feel special without saying a word." (AMEN!!)

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
    Thank you, Barbara. I'm glad you enjoyed. Gretchen
Comment from w.j.debi
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You do an excellent job with the flashback. Not everyone does so I applaud how well you did it. Grandma speaks from experience and knows better things are ahead for Ellie. Excellent descriptions and dialogue to bring your characters to life.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
    Thank you so much. Gretchen
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
Exceptional
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What a perfect little story! I think I've said this before, your work is publishable. Of course, that means you have to develop a business plan, but it is nice to see your work in print.

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
    Thank you, Carol. Hopefully once I semi retire I can devote more time to publishing. I appreciate your excellent rating for this. Gretchen
Comment from jmdg1954
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Awe... cute story which I'm sure happens in many varieties or circumstances.
There is a match for everyone out there. When you find it or it finds you, fight for dear life to keep it!
Nicely written, Gretchen.

John

 Comment Written 13-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 13-Jul-2023
    Thanks so much, John. I believe it's true. Key is patience to wait for the right one. Lol. Gretchen