Prisoner of Doubt
Doubts Then, Doubts Now3 total reviews
Comment from Andrea Kepple
You give a real sense of who John is and how he felt unconnected from the rest of the world with no real purpose or direction. The chance meeting with someone he knew in high school that gave him a new perspective because it gave him a chance to see life through someone else's eyes, someone he identified with.
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You give a real sense of who John is and how he felt unconnected from the rest of the world with no real purpose or direction. The chance meeting with someone he knew in high school that gave him a new perspective because it gave him a chance to see life through someone else's eyes, someone he identified with.
Comment Written 08-Jul-2023
Comment from Douglas Goff
Interesting piece of work here. It ended with a wonderful turn-around. Kife certainly can and does change on a dime.
Good luck with them foo word flash fiction.
Thank you for sharing.
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Interesting piece of work here. It ended with a wonderful turn-around. Kife certainly can and does change on a dime.
Good luck with them foo word flash fiction.
Thank you for sharing.
D
Comment Written 07-Jul-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A flash fiction full of wisdom here as we never know of other people's struggles in life and then we realise that our own life has not been that bad after all, a poignant write, much enjoyed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
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A flash fiction full of wisdom here as we never know of other people's struggles in life and then we realise that our own life has not been that bad after all, a poignant write, much enjoyed, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jul-2023