Ned's Bread
Bread is dangerous2 total reviews
Comment from jim vecchio
You created a poem
With a funny, yet ghastly tone
Ted became a corpse
Because he ate the bread, of course!
Next time, buy a loaf of wheat or rye
Unless you want to choke and die
This is a poem Ted should've read often
But, alas, he lies in a coffin
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2023
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You created a poem
With a funny, yet ghastly tone
Ted became a corpse
Because he ate the bread, of course!
Next time, buy a loaf of wheat or rye
Unless you want to choke and die
This is a poem Ted should've read often
But, alas, he lies in a coffin
Comment Written 02-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2023
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Ha! Awesome. Great answer poem. Thanks for the 5 stars!
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Thank you, wherever you ares
You certainly deserve 5 stars!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a fun verse in which you seem to have had a lot of fun yourself. I've never thought of bread as being particularly dangerous but it seems to have got the better of Ted. Thanks for sharing. Deb :)
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2023
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This is a fun verse in which you seem to have had a lot of fun yourself. I've never thought of bread as being particularly dangerous but it seems to have got the better of Ted. Thanks for sharing. Deb :)
Comment Written 02-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2023
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Thanks so much for the review! I really do appreciate it, and I am glad you enjoyed it.