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A Little One

A new baby arrives

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Comment from Ricky1024
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This writing prompt entry based on the arrival of a baby was well written Rich in Theme and imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
Thanks for sharing this and good luck with your contest entry.
Doctor Ricky

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
    Thank you so much! I am glad that you enjoyed it.
Comment from JSD
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So true. Excellent writing. Unforced and light rhyme and rhythm. And such a lovely message to share. Well done.

John

"Seeing through a glass darkly."

 Comment Written 01-Jul-2023


reply by the author on 01-Jul-2023
    Thank you! It was originally written for a doctor of mine that had a new baby and I put this poem on the card with the gift.