My Notes From Above The Ground.
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 " The Corn and the Wheat Fields."A collection of episods of a Homeless Woman.
2 total reviews
Comment from JSD
Good ol' Renate. Always produces the goods. A topical and sensitively told story which is fascinating and I look forward to the next chapter and the dream. Excellent narrative and convincing dialogue.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Good ol' Renate. Always produces the goods. A topical and sensitively told story which is fascinating and I look forward to the next chapter and the dream. Excellent narrative and convincing dialogue.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Hi JSD: I am happy that my writing skills have improved and I am indebted to persons like yourself for recognizing and often correcting my work. I appreciate your comments and thanks for the rating. I urge you to read all previous and future chapters. All the best.
Arun
Comment from prettybluebirds
The word (stake) should be (steak). The word (dinner) should be (diner). Cowshed does not need to be capitalized. There may be a few other errors that you can correct with editing. It is a n interesting story.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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The word (stake) should be (steak). The word (dinner) should be (diner). Cowshed does not need to be capitalized. There may be a few other errors that you can correct with editing. It is a n interesting story.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Thanks Prettybluebirds. I am not sure how long I will be able to write. With age, I am losing language skills. Having lots of trouble in spelling and remembering words and phrases. The errors you have pointed out are example of my failing abilities. I will do the editing immediately. Thanks again.
Arun.
