Fear
5-7-5 Poem17 total reviews
Comment from tempeste
Ciao !
Very true..that's because what we don't know often scares us.
I remember my first day as a caddie.
I was worried to make a fool out of myself... all those golf clubs scared me...and their names.
The match ended and I was still alive and nothing disastrous
happened. It was actually no big deal. So much energy wasted.
PS: just friendly suggestion..you need to enlarge your font. Most elderly members will not be able to read your poetry.
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Ciao !
Very true..that's because what we don't know often scares us.
I remember my first day as a caddie.
I was worried to make a fool out of myself... all those golf clubs scared me...and their names.
The match ended and I was still alive and nothing disastrous
happened. It was actually no big deal. So much energy wasted.
PS: just friendly suggestion..you need to enlarge your font. Most elderly members will not be able to read your poetry.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2023
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Thank you for your review and feedback.
Comment from godlucifer
just the other day i went to the allergy doctor. thought he was going to take my allergy medication. turn out he didn't but i was worry for two weeks. your poem was a delighted read. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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just the other day i went to the allergy doctor. thought he was going to take my allergy medication. turn out he didn't but i was worry for two weeks. your poem was a delighted read. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 24-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your review and sharing your story.
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Andrea,
This poem tells a truth in a few words. Sometimes we make things harder than they should be. Though the picture does seem to be a dangerous situation for the boat, But maybe the strorm winds will blown the ship around that obstacle.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have an enjoyable weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Hi Andrea,
This poem tells a truth in a few words. Sometimes we make things harder than they should be. Though the picture does seem to be a dangerous situation for the boat, But maybe the strorm winds will blown the ship around that obstacle.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Good luck in the contest.
Have an enjoyable weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your review and feedback.
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No problem, Andrea.
Joan
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Your verse is a fine definition of fear to which I can definitely relate. Your 5-7-5 form is accurately counted and with image this post hits the spot when it comes to evocative presentation. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Your verse is a fine definition of fear to which I can definitely relate. Your 5-7-5 form is accurately counted and with image this post hits the spot when it comes to evocative presentation. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your review and feedback.
Comment from walk.write.reflect
I greatly appreciate your wise words, which I have memorized, written down in my journal, and marked as a treasured quote from Andrea Kepple. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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I greatly appreciate your wise words, which I have memorized, written down in my journal, and marked as a treasured quote from Andrea Kepple. Thank you for sharing. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your kind review. I'm touched you've recorded my poem in your journal.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice artwork and presentation, Andrea.
-Welcome to FanStory; hope you enjoy it.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-You describe the nature of fear very well and
have a very good message about going through it.
-Sometimes it can "turn out "to be nothing."
-A good entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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-Nice artwork and presentation, Andrea.
-Welcome to FanStory; hope you enjoy it.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-You describe the nature of fear very well and
have a very good message about going through it.
-Sometimes it can "turn out "to be nothing."
-A good entry; good luck!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your review and feedback.
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You are welcome.
Comment from JT traveller
I call it the "retrospectoscope," things always seem cheerier on the other side.
A thought provoking short poem. I really enjoyed reading it,
Jacqueline
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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I call it the "retrospectoscope," things always seem cheerier on the other side.
A thought provoking short poem. I really enjoyed reading it,
Jacqueline
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from CD Richards
How very true. How much time I've wasted dreading the outcome of something, and it's turned out to be, as you say, nothing.
This is a strong entry for the contest, and I hope it does well.
Craig
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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How very true. How much time I've wasted dreading the outcome of something, and it's turned out to be, as you say, nothing.
This is a strong entry for the contest, and I hope it does well.
Craig
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Regina Elliott
Words of wisdom in a concise
poem. I love short poetry,
because although small, it
packs a punch, (in a good way) My very best wishes for
the contest! Blessings!
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Words of wisdom in a concise
poem. I love short poetry,
because although small, it
packs a punch, (in a good way) My very best wishes for
the contest! Blessings!
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from JSD
A truthful, philosophical thought, encapsulated ably in a mere seventeen syllables. It's simply stated but within it is one of the keys to survival. Well done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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A truthful, philosophical thought, encapsulated ably in a mere seventeen syllables. It's simply stated but within it is one of the keys to survival. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2023
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Thank you for your review.