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Hope you have a good laugh.6 total reviews
Comment from Kaiku
Nice poke at yourself on this one. One can only recognize the 'coconuts', 'gloomy' however I didn't picture the 'butt' but I can hear you 'cuss'. Fun little poem that does a bit of uncovering.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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Nice poke at yourself on this one. One can only recognize the 'coconuts', 'gloomy' however I didn't picture the 'butt' but I can hear you 'cuss'. Fun little poem that does a bit of uncovering.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2023
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2023
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They were really a curse, especially for a tomboy like me.
Thanks for the extra star (wink)
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smile
Comment from patricia dillon
The hahaha was very appropriate. This certainly made me laugh. I would not be brave enough to describe myself so graphically. But I empathise, particularly with the bit about the coconuts.
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The hahaha was very appropriate. This certainly made me laugh. I would not be brave enough to describe myself so graphically. But I empathise, particularly with the bit about the coconuts.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2023
Comment from Andrea Kepple
I like how you chose your words for your poem. The start with the comparison to Frankenstein sets up the rest of the poem for the comparisons you make to other animals or plants.
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I like how you chose your words for your poem. The start with the comparison to Frankenstein sets up the rest of the poem for the comparisons you make to other animals or plants.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2023
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Ha ha ha it's a great title because that was hilarious. You have a funny sense of humor. This is an excellent entry you've got my vote. I love the silliness of it.
Kerry
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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Ha ha ha it's a great title because that was hilarious. You have a funny sense of humor. This is an excellent entry you've got my vote. I love the silliness of it.
Kerry
Comment Written 16-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2023
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Glad you found it funny, Humour is not really my strong point but I wanted to give it a shot.
Stay safe!
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It was very funny and you do have a funny sense of humor lol. I just came in from cutting my hedges, I gotta go, bring my car to the shop to check my battery. I'm gonna try and catch up on all my fanstory stuff later.
Comment from Paul Manton
Well done on making this self-effacing poem so funny! I laughed out loud not only because of the great choice of language, but it reminded me (very accurately) of one of my best friends - except she is never quiet as a tomb - more like a jumbo jet! Good luck with all your future writing - and never stop going 'Kaboom!'
Paul
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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Well done on making this self-effacing poem so funny! I laughed out loud not only because of the great choice of language, but it reminded me (very accurately) of one of my best friends - except she is never quiet as a tomb - more like a jumbo jet! Good luck with all your future writing - and never stop going 'Kaboom!'
Paul
Comment Written 16-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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Thank for the kind review, glad it made you chuckle!
The jumbo jet reference made me smile.
Welcome to fansite, Paul Manton !
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi,
This poem surely meets the prompt. It gave me to giggle or two.
This is a good description of one who is a contradiction in all things.
A short person in a tall family and an unfit looking athlete.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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Hi,
This poem surely meets the prompt. It gave me to giggle or two.
This is a good description of one who is a contradiction in all things.
A short person in a tall family and an unfit looking athlete.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 16-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2023
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My parents were 1.75 and 1.78 my bro 1.90
The butt is due to my paternal heritage ( sigh)
Thanks for the positive feedback
Best wishes for a peaceful weekend !
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You're welcome. I had to convert those heights to feet and inches. So you're the height one of my sisters.
Joan
