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Life Is A Test

It really is.

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Comment from tempeste
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Ciao poet, you now have 8 votes.

Adamo and Eva sinned when they chose to eat from the Tree of Knowledge after God had told them not to.

They thought they didn't need God's guidance to thrive.

God to prove them wrong banished them from the Garden of Eden and gave Mankind a limited time to live on its own device. (The TEST)

Mankind has failed miserably...those in power just think to get rich, Mankind has exploited and abused Mother Nature, a good part of our home planet is at war and thousands of innocent children die every day of famine and disease.

For them, life is just pain and suffering.

Without God's help, we are destined to fail. We need his guidance.

God sent his Son, who spread His Holy word and then died on the cross so Mankind could obtain eternal life if it chose to open its hearts towards God and follow His teachings.

So now it's up to each one to make the right CHOICES in life.



 Comment Written 14-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
    Thanks!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
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If that is one's recipe for success in life, they ought to pass it along as you did. A fervent testimony of what is and shall be, and yet a warning is to avoid being lackadaisical. He gave us talents to use not waste.

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
    Thanks!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
    Yes but nothing about talents in the poem.
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2023
    Thanks for creating the contest.
Comment from Wendy G
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A fine poem of faith and with a clear expression of what life is or should be about. You have presented your poem well with a well-chosen image and font colour. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
    Thanks!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Fine advice on how to live and care for others to always forgive and welcome others with a smile, I enjoyed your fine words for the contest and wish you luck, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 13-Jun-2023


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
    Thanks!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2023
    Thanks, I have to put text in bold!