Human Glue
This is about the bond my children and I share2 total reviews
Comment from Sanku
i am glad you and your children are finally free and that the enduring the unendurable has given all of you strength and you stand united. You have managed to write a good acrostic wit the word'Human glue'
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
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i am glad you and your children are finally free and that the enduring the unendurable has given all of you strength and you stand united. You have managed to write a good acrostic wit the word'Human glue'
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much! We are grateful for our freedom and our unity!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Congrats here on your first milestone which is excellently done! Strong message conveying a newly found sense of freedom from "the chains that choked" albeit paradoxically still 'glued' or 'nestled' together with the ones that matter - your children. This acrostic verse also adds rhyme to give the whole work flow and cohesion. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
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Congrats here on your first milestone which is excellently done! Strong message conveying a newly found sense of freedom from "the chains that choked" albeit paradoxically still 'glued' or 'nestled' together with the ones that matter - your children. This acrostic verse also adds rhyme to give the whole work flow and cohesion. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2023
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Thank you! We live all over the country and were recently able to all be together and my poem definitely conveys all my feelings of still being so beautifully knit together!
