Condensed Within the Count...
a naani entry5 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Congratulations on your blue ribbon. Unfortunately I missed your post before and the vote But this is a very classy one that really takes the reader beyond the words which are so skilfully selected in this Naani poem bringing out emotions, thoughts and sheer craft. Thanks for sharing Debbie
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023
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Congratulations on your blue ribbon. Unfortunately I missed your post before and the vote But this is a very classy one that really takes the reader beyond the words which are so skilfully selected in this Naani poem bringing out emotions, thoughts and sheer craft. Thanks for sharing Debbie
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much DEBBIE!! What a great compliment :)
God bless...
Comment from karenina
Oh, how I wish I'd been more frugal with my six-star stash this week. Your Naani is so deserving of the highest award possible. If FS voters are as smart as I hope they are you will be rewarded with first place for this profound, imaginative, emotional offering!
Bravo~
Karenina
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Oh, how I wish I'd been more frugal with my six-star stash this week. Your Naani is so deserving of the highest award possible. If FS voters are as smart as I hope they are you will be rewarded with first place for this profound, imaginative, emotional offering!
Bravo~
Karenina
Comment Written 07-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Oh you are the best!
Thank you :)
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Hah! So glad this was yours!
Comment from Andrea Kepple
I like how the picture compliments the poem. The poem speaks to writers especially when we get caught up in the emotions of what we are writing, the emotions we are trying to express.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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I like how the picture compliments the poem. The poem speaks to writers especially when we get caught up in the emotions of what we are writing, the emotions we are trying to express.
Comment Written 07-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A clever write and you managed to keep within the parameters here to create a readable poem with few syllables here within the short count, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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A clever write and you managed to keep within the parameters here to create a readable poem with few syllables here within the short count, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 07-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much Dolly!! Love seeing your name :)
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A great description of the pressures of getting the syllables, the words right. Great phrasing and alliteration of - walls choke words -. Well done with this Naani poem and good luck in the contest. Cheers
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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A great description of the pressures of getting the syllables, the words right. Great phrasing and alliteration of - walls choke words -. Well done with this Naani poem and good luck in the contest. Cheers
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Thank you Pearl!