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Ancient Art of Poetry

Viewing comments for Chapter 16 "Train"
A compilation of poems

6 total reviews 
Comment from Mia Twysted
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A true picture of what life is like. It keeps going and going and you just have to go along with it or be left behind. We have a road to ride and there are obstacles along every path.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
    Thank you Mia for your kind and insightful review are very much appreciated! And you are right life is very much like a train!
    Thank you for your time i'm for your kind writing I hope you have an awesome evening!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello,

Excellent entry for the
Naani Poem writing prompt contest.

It's very well done. I love the words imagery and beautiful presentation. Good syllables count and connection between lines.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
    Thank you so much I appreciate your comments. I appreciate your reveal and your time. Thank you again. I hope your evening is amazing!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
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Congratulations on your milestone post. I like the metaphor you have chosen for life, a train that keeps chugging away, no hesitation, no stps. A good Naani poem for the contest.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
    I thank you very kindly for your review and I much appreciate it. You're time and your kind. Comments are also welcome as well I thank you for your Thoughts and perspective I hope your day is great!
Comment from Andrea Kepple
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Your poem is interesting. I like your use of the train as a stand in for us living our lives and our life playing out is like a train running long on the tracks that have been laid out for it.

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
    Thank you andrea For your kind and thoughtful review I appreciate your comments and your insight is refreshing thank you again and hope your day is great!
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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A strong message well illustrated here and in correct syllable count. The image is equally strong enhancing your simple but evocative wording. Thanks and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
    Amazing is always thank you so much for this. I appreciate your review and your time and your fine reading I hope your day's grand!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This heavy machinery is a means of transport we have been very grateful for and trains are a popular method of travel in my country, a fine post and welcome to Fanstory, love Dolly x x x

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2023

reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
    Thank you very much for your kind review of Dollars and so glad you liked it
    Thank you very kindly for your time and for your comments always appreciated!