Comment from Melodie Michelle

Excellent

Excellent storyline which captured my attention throughout the piece and I really enjoyed reading this!

Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family!

 Comment Written 07-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023

Ms. Michelle: I appreciate your encouraging comments. I hope you will read entire book. Story has come from my heart because while living in Hollywood, I came across injustice and lack of compassion and the narrator was born out of my observations. Thanks for your rating.
Arun.

reply by Melodie Michelle on 07-Jun-2023

;-)

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

Hi Niyuta,

I love the way you've observed the value in a marginalized woman and tried to read a story into her life.

I have not read any previous chapters, working just off this piece. You made it very believable. With your words, you created a scenario that lead us through a change the woman had to make. She seemed not to judge her mother, or the others, just be an observer.

Thank you for sharing,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023

Ronda: I am glad you have understood my concern about lack of compassion towards unfortunate humanity. Story is a fiction but it has come from the real situation of humanity. Rich don't want to share and rest of us are indifferent to poverty and homelessness. I hope it will change. Religions have become political and teaching of Buddha, Jesus are forgotten. I hope my story will make readers aware of our primary duty towards each other.
Thank you for the great ratings. All the best.
Arun