In Moons Glow
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Comment from Ginda Simpson
Beautiful moonlight and tender feeling make for a perfectly romantic evening. You capture it's very essence in this poem and the mood lingers after the last word is read.
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Beautiful moonlight and tender feeling make for a perfectly romantic evening. You capture it's very essence in this poem and the mood lingers after the last word is read.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
Comment from Cedar
Hello Jay,
This one is absolutely beautiful. In my opinion, this is the best romantic poem that you have written so far. You just keep getting better and better with age.
Keep writing Jay...You have a God given talent my friend.
Take care...Bill
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Hello Jay,
This one is absolutely beautiful. In my opinion, this is the best romantic poem that you have written so far. You just keep getting better and better with age.
Keep writing Jay...You have a God given talent my friend.
Take care...Bill
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
Comment from Tom Horonzy
The author's sentiments are deeply exposed here, reaching back in time over the veil in his mind that allows him to recall pleasant days or nights from some time ago.
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The author's sentiments are deeply exposed here, reaching back in time over the veil in his mind that allows him to recall pleasant days or nights from some time ago.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
Comment from ESOSTINE
I could relate well with this beautiful poem, written with youthful energy and passion. Well written, dear Jay, and well enjoyed. Thanks for sharing your romantic memories. Warmest regards.
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I could relate well with this beautiful poem, written with youthful energy and passion. Well written, dear Jay, and well enjoyed. Thanks for sharing your romantic memories. Warmest regards.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2023
Comment from Alina Clemens
You've beautiful imagery in this piece, kudos. I also love that it comes full circle nearly a loop poem. And the rhyme scheme gives it a subtle lyrical and romantic tone that fits the story nicely. Well done.
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You've beautiful imagery in this piece, kudos. I also love that it comes full circle nearly a loop poem. And the rhyme scheme gives it a subtle lyrical and romantic tone that fits the story nicely. Well done.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
Comment from Aussie
Love's first bloom. By the light of the silvery moon upon a rug, no need to get a room. Nature surrounded you both and love tender was made by youth. K xx
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Love's first bloom. By the light of the silvery moon upon a rug, no need to get a room. Nature surrounded you both and love tender was made by youth. K xx
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
Comment from royowen
What a lovely poem my friend, an elegant poetic rendition, beautifully written, rhymed that speaks with Al the passion of one's youth and vitality, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
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What a lovely poem my friend, an elegant poetic rendition, beautifully written, rhymed that speaks with Al the passion of one's youth and vitality, beautifully written my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
Comment from harmony13
This is a beautiful love poem! The author's words are engaging, descriptive and creative. These words are all about love and how unity
was made with grace. The poem flows and connects well. Jay, this poem
conveys a love that is hard to find today!
Hope you are doing well!....Maria
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This is a beautiful love poem! The author's words are engaging, descriptive and creative. These words are all about love and how unity
was made with grace. The poem flows and connects well. Jay, this poem
conveys a love that is hard to find today!
Hope you are doing well!....Maria
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
Comment from vpdesignsxo
If I still have 6 stars to give, I'd give you those 6 stars. This poem gave me goosebumps. 5 stars to the poems that bring out emotion from me, 6 stars for the poems that actually bring out a physical experience from me like this one did. Every line is beautifully written. The last line being my favorite. This poem celebrates the enchantment of sweet, sweet love... and you were able to create a vivid experience with all 5 senses.
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If I still have 6 stars to give, I'd give you those 6 stars. This poem gave me goosebumps. 5 stars to the poems that bring out emotion from me, 6 stars for the poems that actually bring out a physical experience from me like this one did. Every line is beautifully written. The last line being my favorite. This poem celebrates the enchantment of sweet, sweet love... and you were able to create a vivid experience with all 5 senses.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
Comment from Ben Colder
Good one, Jay. Brings back fond memories. I see nothing wrong with this nice write. It made sense to me. Thanks for sharing your talent. Best of luck.
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Good one, Jay. Brings back fond memories. I see nothing wrong with this nice write. It made sense to me. Thanks for sharing your talent. Best of luck.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
