Rare Spring Storm
cold/hot disturbance48 total reviews
Comment from Dr. Nad
After a couple weeks hiatus, I'm back. Well for an hour or so. L O L.
Debi, Debi, Debi, another excellent rhyming poem that takes the power of a real moment in time and creates for all of your fans, including your brother, a scenic beauty fraught with potential danger. (Can anyone say run-on sentence?)
Girl, you took it all in stride, and brought us along for the ride. Thanks so much sis.
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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After a couple weeks hiatus, I'm back. Well for an hour or so. L O L.
Debi, Debi, Debi, another excellent rhyming poem that takes the power of a real moment in time and creates for all of your fans, including your brother, a scenic beauty fraught with potential danger. (Can anyone say run-on sentence?)
Girl, you took it all in stride, and brought us along for the ride. Thanks so much sis.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much Nad, as you are so sweet and caring and so very kind. You are the best, bro. And thank you for the extra stars!
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You are of course most welcome! But I didn't get you any extra stars. I looked all over for seven and I couldn't find it! Lol
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You are of course most welcome! But I didn't get you any extra stars. I looked all over for seven and I couldn't find it! Lol
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Lol, silly boy.. you keep that up and you will be my favorite of anyone. Except God that is! (Hugs)
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Blessings!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment from DeboraDyess
Yikes! I thought I'd seen scary skies here in Central-West Texas but nothing like this. Well, except for that tornado... But STILL! This is terrifying. Thunder-snow? Never heard of such a thing!
I noticed in your notes you said 'either of us' when you meant 'neither of us'. Just a small oops. :)
Blessings and thanks. This is a great entry!
Blessings,
Deb
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023
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Yikes! I thought I'd seen scary skies here in Central-West Texas but nothing like this. Well, except for that tornado... But STILL! This is terrifying. Thunder-snow? Never heard of such a thing!
I noticed in your notes you said 'either of us' when you meant 'neither of us'. Just a small oops. :)
Blessings and thanks. This is a great entry!
Blessings,
Deb
Comment Written 08-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023
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Hey thanks sweetie for catching that mistake. I do appreciate the catch as I am not as careful writing the notes and thank you messages, etc.... However the notes I should not depend on auto correct because it doesn't always say the right thing. As I know you are aware of. Thank you for this outstanding review tho. Thanks again dear friend.
Comment from Janet Foor
It does look like an angry storm. Nice personification of the weather phenomenon. Great picture and presentation for your poem. Brilliant colors that do look scary. Glad you all are safe.
Nicely done Debbi
Blessings
Janet.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023
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It does look like an angry storm. Nice personification of the weather phenomenon. Great picture and presentation for your poem. Brilliant colors that do look scary. Glad you all are safe.
Nicely done Debbi
Blessings
Janet.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2023
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Thank you so much Janet. You are so kind and I appreciate your kind review and comments so much, my dear friend.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
That is a great picture of a truly ominous sky. Certain weather conditions can sure create unique storms. We just got a trampoline and now I have something else to worry about. Hope you found yours.
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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That is a great picture of a truly ominous sky. Certain weather conditions can sure create unique storms. We just got a trampoline and now I have something else to worry about. Hope you found yours.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Hi there Carol, I thank you so much for the kind words for my poem and the photo I took for the contest. I was happy to get this one because I have always found weather fascinating. Thanks again for the great review, my friend
Comment from Pearl Edwards
Well described in both notes and poem Debi. A great photo you managed of a mean looking black cloud before you got inside to safety. The differring temps certainly made their presence felt. Hope no damage was done.
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Well described in both notes and poem Debi. A great photo you managed of a mean looking black cloud before you got inside to safety. The differring temps certainly made their presence felt. Hope no damage was done.
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2023
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Hi Valda, I thank you so much for the kind words for my poem and the photo I took for the contest. I was happy to get this one because I have always found weather fascinating. Thanks again for the great review, my friend
Comment from w.j.debi
Mother Nature can throw us a curve from time to time. Set up the right conditions and "surprise" here comes a one-two punch. Beautiful picture, but I'm happy you were able to get to the house in time.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Mother Nature can throw us a curve from time to time. Set up the right conditions and "surprise" here comes a one-two punch. Beautiful picture, but I'm happy you were able to get to the house in time.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Hi Debi, I thank you so much for the kind words for my poem and the photo I took for the contest. I was happy to get this one because I have always found weather fascinating. Thanks again for the great review, my friend
Comment from Raul1
I think that we all get what your poem is all about and it's beautifully written. I did enjoy reading it. I like it. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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I think that we all get what your poem is all about and it's beautifully written. I did enjoy reading it. I like it. Excellent work! No mistakes found. Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Raul, I thank you so much for the kind words for my poem and the photo I took for the contest. I was happy to get this one because I have always found weather fascinating. Thanks again for the great review, my friend
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Anytime and no problem at all! I'm here to help.
Comment from Willie P. Smith
Debbie, you have earned this six. I found your poem to be a tad scary
and in some places, you gave me a little chuckle. Being raised in Illinois, I have witnessed some very frightening storms, Good to hear from you, my friend
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Debbie, you have earned this six. I found your poem to be a tad scary
and in some places, you gave me a little chuckle. Being raised in Illinois, I have witnessed some very frightening storms, Good to hear from you, my friend
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Oh Willie, it is so good to hear from you again. I miss you my friend. Thank you for reading this one and all the kind words, and that love six star rating. Don't we all love that honor? And I do appreciate it so much. Thanks my dear friend and after next week's eye surgery and the one on the 28th I may have some vision back where I may be able to review more. I plan on heading straight for your place and having coffee with you and your lovely wife after. Lol... I am looking forward to it tho!
Comment from Goodadvicechan
A good photo and a good poem..,
It is unusual to have such a storm in April.
Thank you for sharing what you see and how you feel in this poem.
The event was well described well described ...
Good writing
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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A good photo and a good poem..,
It is unusual to have such a storm in April.
Thank you for sharing what you see and how you feel in this poem.
The event was well described well described ...
Good writing
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Hi Chan, I thank you so much for the kind words for my poem and the photo I took for the contest. I was happy to get this one because I have always found weather fascinating. Thanks again for the great review, my friend
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Excellent poem and flowed quite nicely throughout the piece! Loved the rhyming and this piece was very well written and thought out.
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family!
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Excellent poem and flowed quite nicely throughout the piece! Loved the rhyming and this piece was very well written and thought out.
Thank you for sharing and may God bless you and your family!
Comment Written 06-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2023
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Melodie, I thank you so much for the kind words for my poem and the photo I took for the contest. I was happy to get this one because I have always found weather fascinating. Thanks again for the great review, my friend
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