From Morning to Night
A Monchielle for Potlatch Poetry27 total reviews
Comment from Ben Colder
Love this. My birds are at the feeders both and during the day. I think between the squirrels and the Blue Jays, my feed bill has doubled. Great poem, beautiful photo.
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Love this. My birds are at the feeders both and during the day. I think between the squirrels and the Blue Jays, my feed bill has doubled. Great poem, beautiful photo.
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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I know. They can put it away. Thanks, Ben.
Comment from Bill Schott
This monchielle, From Morning to Night, has the proper formatting and allows that all creatures big and small have important work to perform from dawn to dusk.
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This monchielle, From Morning to Night, has the proper formatting and allows that all creatures big and small have important work to perform from dawn to dusk.
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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They truly do. Thanks, Bill.
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a fine example of the type of poem that needs the discipline of form as it describes a day in the life of the birds that also needs the discipline of regularity. Here the form enhances the poem, form and content nicely paired. It wouldn't have worked as well with free verse as the form and content would have been at loggerheads.
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This is a fine example of the type of poem that needs the discipline of form as it describes a day in the life of the birds that also needs the discipline of regularity. Here the form enhances the poem, form and content nicely paired. It wouldn't have worked as well with free verse as the form and content would have been at loggerheads.
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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Thank you for saying that. I appreciate your lovely comments.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
A very atmospheric post! I enjoyed the way you introduced these lovely examples of nature during the course of the day, a cycle of happiness and wonder. A perfect verse form for this theme. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
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A very atmospheric post! I enjoyed the way you introduced these lovely examples of nature during the course of the day, a cycle of happiness and wonder. A perfect verse form for this theme. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from Dawn Munro
You, my friend, are amazing. How you make all these different poetry formats sing! This is lovely, Yvonne. And your presentation is stunning (as usual). Thank you for sharing!
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You, my friend, are amazing. How you make all these different poetry formats sing! This is lovely, Yvonne. And your presentation is stunning (as usual). Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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Thank you for this wonderful review . . . and stars! Hugs for you and Cleo.
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Hugs right back!!!
Comment from Wendy G
I enjoyed this one, as you noted the habits of the birds, then the flowers, then the crickets and finally the humans. Each has a particular routine to be enjoyed, and to give fulfilment and satisfaction. It's an interesting and different format, and you accomplished it well.
Wendy
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I enjoyed this one, as you noted the habits of the birds, then the flowers, then the crickets and finally the humans. Each has a particular routine to be enjoyed, and to give fulfilment and satisfaction. It's an interesting and different format, and you accomplished it well.
Wendy
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Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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Thank you. I appreciate the compliment.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Birds are also creatures of habit and once you put food out, they expect it everyday. Your repeated lines made me think that you are regularly having to buy them food as you meet their hungry requirements here, a fun post Yvonne, love Dolly x
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Birds are also creatures of habit and once you put food out, they expect it everyday. Your repeated lines made me think that you are regularly having to buy them food as you meet their hungry requirements here, a fun post Yvonne, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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Oh, yes, they are well fed, the little stinkers. hahaha. I enjoy them so much. Thanks, Dolly.
