From Morning to Night
A Monchielle for Potlatch Poetry27 total reviews
Comment from Regina Elliott
So very charming and describes imagery very
colorfully. It's summery, and
the cicada orchestra is a
nice touch. This is such a
wondrous club entry. Many
blessings to you. ~
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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So very charming and describes imagery very
colorfully. It's summery, and
the cicada orchestra is a
nice touch. This is such a
wondrous club entry. Many
blessings to you. ~
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Thank you so much. I love to hear the cicadas.
Comment from jake cosmos aller
nicely done poem about birds and their role in the environment. very moving pastoral poem. You nailed the form. I generally shy away from metrical poetry, for some reason I have a hard time hearing meter.
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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nicely done poem about birds and their role in the environment. very moving pastoral poem. You nailed the form. I generally shy away from metrical poetry, for some reason I have a hard time hearing meter.
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Thank you. I have a friend who has the same problem. Your other writing talents make up for it, so to speak.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are lovely, descriptive and creative. The format of
this poem is exceptional including the pictures, the print and colors! I found the last stanza have a beautiful message! The artwork is stunning
and compliments the theme and words of this poem.
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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The author's words are lovely, descriptive and creative. The format of
this poem is exceptional including the pictures, the print and colors! I found the last stanza have a beautiful message! The artwork is stunning
and compliments the theme and words of this poem.
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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Thank you so much!
Comment from aryr
This definitely was an interesting poem, damommy. I was really impressed with the pictures, they show the wisdom of your words. The words of your poem implied that they have a substantial appetite; the blossums reach for the sun and we each toil to end of the day. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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This definitely was an interesting poem, damommy. I was really impressed with the pictures, they show the wisdom of your words. The words of your poem implied that they have a substantial appetite; the blossums reach for the sun and we each toil to end of the day. Very well done and greatly enjoyed. Blessings n Hugs!!!
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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Thank you for a great review.
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Most welcome, Yvonne.
Comment from lyenochka
What a great monchielle poem! And your repeated line makes sense because the "sunup and sundown" times are when the birds are the most vocal. The sun gets up too early these days and so those birdies make a ruckus! Beautiful ! And please don't overdo feeding those birdies. I don't want them to take advantage of you!
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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What a great monchielle poem! And your repeated line makes sense because the "sunup and sundown" times are when the birds are the most vocal. The sun gets up too early these days and so those birdies make a ruckus! Beautiful ! And please don't overdo feeding those birdies. I don't want them to take advantage of you!
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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Too late! They already do. They even come to the door and look in at me when the feeders are low.
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Lol! You are certainly kept busy!!
Comment from royowen
An excellent monchelle Yvonne, I think it's the sunflower that follows the sun's path across the sky, there's a lot of poetic styles coming up, non thst I particularly like though, but you do a great job my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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An excellent monchelle Yvonne, I think it's the sunflower that follows the sun's path across the sky, there's a lot of poetic styles coming up, non thst I particularly like though, but you do a great job my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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Thanks, Roy.
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Most welcome
Comment from GWHARGIS
It is unique that the majority of people, animals and insects do their thing in the day. Few venture out at night. But the ones that do prefer the dark are subjects for another poem. This was a fun read. Thank you for posting. Gretchen
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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It is unique that the majority of people, animals and insects do their thing in the day. Few venture out at night. But the ones that do prefer the dark are subjects for another poem. This was a fun read. Thank you for posting. Gretchen
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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Thank you!
Comment from barbara.wilkey
All creatures great and small are tending to their day making all right with the world. Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I enjoyed reading. I feed the birds and they are a greedy little bunch, but so fun to watch and is the squirrel who thinks he's sneaky, but we all know he's there.
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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All creatures great and small are tending to their day making all right with the world. Thank you for sharing this club entry with us. I enjoyed reading. I feed the birds and they are a greedy little bunch, but so fun to watch and is the squirrel who thinks he's sneaky, but we all know he's there.
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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I see you enjoy them as much as I do. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
What a great beginning and ending picture with your
busy action of critters sandwiched in between, Yvonne.
I enjoyed reading your creative poem. Your lines and
rhymes were correct. The rhymes on line 3 & 5 added
to the smooth flow and kept the poem moving forward.
The details within each verse were descriptive. I could
see each critter doing its thing. Yes, everything in nature
tries to survive and finding food is vital. I like the way the
flowers lift their heads toward the sun. Even crickets added
to the symphony of nature.
Thanks for sharing and participating, Jan
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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What a great beginning and ending picture with your
busy action of critters sandwiched in between, Yvonne.
I enjoyed reading your creative poem. Your lines and
rhymes were correct. The rhymes on line 3 & 5 added
to the smooth flow and kept the poem moving forward.
The details within each verse were descriptive. I could
see each critter doing its thing. Yes, everything in nature
tries to survive and finding food is vital. I like the way the
flowers lift their heads toward the sun. Even crickets added
to the symphony of nature.
Thanks for sharing and participating, Jan
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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Such a wonderful review. I hope I can get my head through the door now. Thanks a bunch!
Comment from BethShelby
This Monchielle is a nice form of poetry. It sounds like your birds are on a three meal a day plan. My eat from sun up to sun down. I guess most creature maintain those hours but then there are a low of them on the night shift as well. I enjoyed your poem.
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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This Monchielle is a nice form of poetry. It sounds like your birds are on a three meal a day plan. My eat from sun up to sun down. I guess most creature maintain those hours but then there are a low of them on the night shift as well. I enjoyed your poem.
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 29-May-2023
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Mine eat all day, too. I enjoy the different birds, and also the squirrels. I saw a red squirrel the other day, which is unusual here. Took a photo for proof.
