Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Oh, what a charming poem! I am smitten!!! And that artwork is absolutely perfect! You must tell me -- did the picture inspire the poem? (*smile*) Thank you for sharing this jewel.

 Comment Written 29-May-2023

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reply by the author on 30-May-2023

Hi Dawn. Thank you for your wonderful review. It is whimsical and I wanted to share my perceptions of ideas raining down :). Thanks again, my friend.

Melissa

reply by Dawn Munro on 30-May-2023

It was my pleasure, Melissa -- I loved it!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You made this bear look totally innocent in this magical write Melissa and I loved your view on life here as we go through life in wonderment of all that nature offers, a delicate and whimsical write, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-May-2023

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reply by the author on 30-May-2023

Hi Dolly. Thank you for your wonderful review. It is whimsical and I wanted to share my perceptions of ideas raining down :). Thanks again, my friend.

Melissa

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

Haha. This is funny. I'm glad you are back. I have been a little busy, too with taking many trips having fun.

Your idea of using butterflies as metaphor for creative ideas is very unique.

Well done.

 Comment Written 28-May-2023

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reply by the author on 30-May-2023

Hi Lisa. Thank you for your wonderful review. It is whimsical and I wanted to share my perceptions of ideas raining down :). Thanks again, my friend.

Melissa

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Love your description of ideas - and yes we want those ideas to fall on us to inspire us to write and share. Loved the metaphor and the lovely picture that fit perfectly!

 Comment Written 28-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

Hello Helen. Thanks so much. I told Jan that I plan to capture as many as I can and keep them in a mason jar... I'm going to send her a few to wear in her hair ;0). Thank you, dear friend.

Melissa

reply by lyenochka on 28-May-2023

😊💖💐Sounds like a good plan!

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Excellent

Well done. I wish to be that bear. Instead, my ideres strike like lightning and if. Single bolt, ok but often mine comes in cluster and at night which keeps me awake.

 Comment Written 28-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

haha... I think you need a weather vane to draw those lightening bolts to one place... preferably your notepad :). Thank you, Tom!

Melissa

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

That was truly beautiful.

I love comparing ideas to fluttering butterflies.

Amazing imagery, visuals and artistic presentation.

Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 28-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

Thanks so much. I am delighted you liked it and savored the imagery :)

Melissa

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Well, Melissa, if more than one lands, please send me one.
I enjoyed your fun poem. I loved its presentation--the color
scheme, the image, the formatting of lines, and your great
message.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

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 Comment Written 28-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

Hello Jan... thanks bunches! I hope to catch a mason jar full and will send a few along for you to wear in your hair ;). Glad you liked it. :)

Melissa