Ideas
a short verse27 total reviews
Comment from royowen
Heh heh, just love the thought of the bear sitting there in the beautiful countryside, thinking to himself, "I wish one of those butterflies will land on me" heh heh, beautifully written my dear friend Melissa, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Heh heh, just love the thought of the bear sitting there in the beautiful countryside, thinking to himself, "I wish one of those butterflies will land on me" heh heh, beautifully written my dear friend Melissa, blessings Roy
Comment Written 29-May-2023
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Hi Roy. Thank you for your wonderful review. It is whimsical and I wanted to share my perceptions of ideas raining down :). Thanks again, my friend.
Melissa
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Well done
Comment from Sally Law
This is just precious, Melissa! I am like the bear, watching and waiting for my next bit of inspiration. I was inspired reading this one. A refreshing poem and illuminating. Sending you my best in all things.
Sal XOs
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This is just precious, Melissa! I am like the bear, watching and waiting for my next bit of inspiration. I was inspired reading this one. A refreshing poem and illuminating. Sending you my best in all things.
Sal XOs
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Hi Sally. Thank you for your wonderful review. It is whimsical and I wanted to share my perceptions of ideas raining down :). Thanks again, my friend.
Melissa
Comment from Mrs. KT
What a creative and calming poetic offering, Melissa!
I can see this offering in a children's book of poetry.
I especially love the second half of your poem:
I stand
very still so
that one might
land on
me.
Beautiful!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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What a creative and calming poetic offering, Melissa!
I can see this offering in a children's book of poetry.
I especially love the second half of your poem:
I stand
very still so
that one might
land on
me.
Beautiful!
Thank you for sharing!
diane
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Hi Diane. Thank you for your wonderful review. I'm so glad you liked it. It is whimsical and I wanted to share my perceptions of ideas raining down :). Thanks again, my friend.
Melissa
Comment from June Sargent
Your muse sends butterflies - what a lovely metaphor! This is so beautiful. As usual, Melissa, your words paint an amazing picture. Well done. I love the bear.
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Your muse sends butterflies - what a lovely metaphor! This is so beautiful. As usual, Melissa, your words paint an amazing picture. Well done. I love the bear.
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Hi June. Thank you for your wonderful review. It is whimsical and I wanted to share my perceptions of ideas raining down :). Thanks again, my friend.
Melissa
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This short verse is an excellent portrayal of the ideas that float like butterflies down upon all of us as we write our poetry. I love the picture of the bears standing all over the field while the blue butterflies float down and around them causing them to unite and stand for peace and prosperity!
This is just what this poem caused me to create while reading it.
Jesse
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This short verse is an excellent portrayal of the ideas that float like butterflies down upon all of us as we write our poetry. I love the picture of the bears standing all over the field while the blue butterflies float down and around them causing them to unite and stand for peace and prosperity!
This is just what this poem caused me to create while reading it.
Jesse
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Hi Jesse. Thank you for your wonderful review. It is whimsical and I wanted to share my perceptions of ideas raining down :). Thanks again, my friend.
Melissa
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Hello Melissa. You are welcome, my friend.
Jesse
Comment from Debbie Pope
You did it again, Melissa. I truly love your short works. You know how to move others by connecting artwork and simple words. I love the authenticity of "I stand very still." There is absolutely nothing wrong with the word "delicate," but I don't think that you need it.
Well done my friend.
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You did it again, Melissa. I truly love your short works. You know how to move others by connecting artwork and simple words. I love the authenticity of "I stand very still." There is absolutely nothing wrong with the word "delicate," but I don't think that you need it.
Well done my friend.
Comment Written 29-May-2023
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Hi sweet Debbie. Thank you for your wonderful review. I am delighted that you enjoyed it!!! It is whimsical and I wanted to share my perceptions of ideas raining down :). Thanks again, my friend.
Melissa
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice image and presentation, Melissa.
-I like your topic and formatting of the poem.
-You create a peaceful mood in the first verse
with the verb 'flutter' and comparison of ideas
to "delicate butterflies."
-A good second verse showing how you
are enjoying the butterflies.
-Well done.
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-Nice image and presentation, Melissa.
-I like your topic and formatting of the poem.
-You create a peaceful mood in the first verse
with the verb 'flutter' and comparison of ideas
to "delicate butterflies."
-A good second verse showing how you
are enjoying the butterflies.
-Well done.
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Hi Pam. Thank you for your wonderful review. It is whimsical and I wanted to share my perceptions of ideas raining down :). Thanks again, my friend.
Melissa
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You are very welcome, Melissa, and thanks for sharing.
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
What a delightful presentation.
I gazed in awe just like the bears.
Your verse is simply stated yet packed with simplicity and wisdom.
I especially enjoyed the last stanza as I love butterflies and it's such a joy when one lands on me.
Blessings
Shirley
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What a delightful presentation.
I gazed in awe just like the bears.
Your verse is simply stated yet packed with simplicity and wisdom.
I especially enjoyed the last stanza as I love butterflies and it's such a joy when one lands on me.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Shirley for your lovely review and encouraging comments. I enjoyed writing this whimsical piece!
Melissa
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You're very welcome Melissa.
Blessings
Shirley
Comment from Ginda Simpson
I love the imagery and sentiment of this poem. There is no doubt that ideas, like blessings, do flutter down to us all the time. We need only be still to recognize them. And being grateful helps too. Enjoy those that come to you today.
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I love the imagery and sentiment of this poem. There is no doubt that ideas, like blessings, do flutter down to us all the time. We need only be still to recognize them. And being grateful helps too. Enjoy those that come to you today.
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Hi Ginda. Thank you for your wonderful review. It is whimsical and I wanted to share my perceptions of ideas raining down :). Thanks again, my friend.
Melissa
Comment from Pantygynt
How do you tell a good idea from a bad idea when it is in the fluttering stage, beautiful and beguiling? I trust you will have ideas as good as this one land on you.
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How do you tell a good idea from a bad idea when it is in the fluttering stage, beautiful and beguiling? I trust you will have ideas as good as this one land on you.
Comment Written 29-May-2023
reply by the author on 30-May-2023
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Hi Jim. Thank you for your wonderful review. It is whimsical and I wanted to share my perceptions of ideas raining down :). Thanks again, my friend.
Melissa
