Comment from tempeste

Exceptional

Ciao Sugarray!

An overload of cuteness here. The pic is sweet and so is the poem.

I like how you associate ideas with butterflies that flutter.

A delightful entry!

 Comment Written 03-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023

Hello Franca... thank you, dear friend, for your lovely review. I'm delighted you liked it!!!

Melissa

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

I love this. It's great to imagine ideas fluttering down like butterflies. A very apt image. I'd love to catch one of those ideas. I'll stand still and see what happens! Very delightful. We all wait for those ideas, and you expressed the desire so creatively. judi

 Comment Written 02-Jun-2023

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2023

Hi Judi. Thank you so much!!!

Melissa

reply by judiverse on 05-Jun-2023

You're very welcome. judi

reply by judiverse on 05-Jun-2023

You're welcome. judi

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This poem, Ideas, presents the process of notion posing, where one assumes the position of inspiration acceptance and waits for the gems to gently fall like gossamer-winged butterflies loaded with powerful poetic pollen.

 Comment Written 31-May-2023

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reply by the author on 01-Jun-2023

Thank you so much, you nut! ... powerful poetic pollen indeed! Haha. I loved your fun review, Bill. Thanks for the laugh.

Melissa

Comment from Mark D. R.

Excellent

Melissa,

Hard to believe that a bear would stand still LOL However, your verse makes a beautiful fantasy about the doing it possible.

Butterflies are a better image than bees (-;

Mark

 Comment Written 30-May-2023

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reply by the author on 30-May-2023

Hi Mark. Thank you for your wonderful review. It is whimsical and I wanted to share my perceptions of ideas raining down :). Thanks again, my friend.

Melissa

Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

Very nice simile, Melissa. The picture and the poem go very well together. My problem is that too many ideas flutter down on me. Thus the many unfinished poems that clutter my desk.

 Comment Written 30-May-2023

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reply by the author on 30-May-2023

Hi Paul. Thank you for your wonderful review. It is whimsical and I wanted to share my perceptions of ideas raining down :). Thanks again, my friend.

Melissa

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

Aww - I love the little butterflies. What a great picture to add to this finely crafted short verse. So many butterflies and so many bears. A nice simple poem that has a freedom about it - like incoming ideas. Nicely done on this enjoyable read.

 Comment Written 30-May-2023

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reply by the author on 30-May-2023

Hi DD. Thank you for your wonderful review. It is whimsical and I wanted to share my perceptions of ideas raining down :). Thanks again, my friend.

Melissa

Comment from Carol Clark2

Excellent

A lovely thought, and the illustration is perfect. Yes, writers are always looking for great ideas, and you had a great one for this poem. I like the fluttering ideas and the simile of the delicate butterflies. Blessings. Carol

 Comment Written 29-May-2023

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reply by the author on 30-May-2023

Hello Carol. Thank you for your wonderful review. It is whimsical and I wanted to share my perceptions of ideas raining down :). Thanks again, my friend.

Melissa

reply by Carol Clark2 on 01-Jun-2023

You're welcome, Melissa. Hope you have a blessed weekend. Carol

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

I like the theme of this poem! The author's words are engaging, descriptive and creative. Butterflies, for me, have a spiritual meaning. I liked how this author uses the word ideas with the fluttering down of butterflies! The poem flows and connect well. The artwork is awesome!
Hi Melissa, hope you had a great Memorial Day Weekend!....Maria

 Comment Written 29-May-2023

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reply by the author on 30-May-2023

Hi Maria. Thank you for your wonderful review. It is whimsical and I wanted to share my perceptions of ideas raining down :). I hope your Memorial Dayt weekend was enjoyable. :)Thanks again, my friend.

Melissa

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Sometimes through my day I have ideas that pass through my head. I always have my phone in my pocket so I take it out and I write down a sentence or two that give me any idea later on what to write about. Patricia

 Comment Written 29-May-2023

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reply by the author on 30-May-2023

Hi Patricia. Thank you for your wonderful review. It is whimsical and I wanted to share my perceptions of ideas raining down :). Thanks for sharing your ideas of writing them on your phone with me. :)

Melissa

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

I love the nature and creativity metaphor. Writing about nature is a core foundation of haiku.

I love the presentation too.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
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 Comment Written 29-May-2023

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reply by the author on 30-May-2023

Hi Gypsy. Thank you for your wonderful review. It is whimsical and I wanted to share my perceptions of ideas raining down :). Thanks again, my friend.

Melissa