Comment from Andrea Kepple

Excellent

I like how you used the constraints of the poem challenge to communicate a message. I like what you did with this poem and I like the message you send through your poem.

 Comment Written 30-May-2023

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reply by the author on 31-May-2023

Thank you so much for this great review, it's very appreciated. :)

Comment from Monica Chaddick

Excellent

Very good poem. I like how you sent a little message in the middle. Great use of antonyms. The picture that you selected is beautiful. I wish you the best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-May-2023

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reply by the author on 31-May-2023

Thank you for reading my poem and for this thoughtful review. :)

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

I really like your poem for the antonym contest. Your lines are simple and clear, making it easy to recognize the opposites. It carries an important message and flows smoothly.

 Comment Written 28-May-2023

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reply by the author on 29-May-2023

Thank you reading my poem and for this nice review. :)

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Fine advice here and I loved the message. Life is short and we should grab every moment and live it to the full, it is soon over, a fine post or the contest, I wish you luck, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-May-2023

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reply by the author on 29-May-2023

Thank you so much, I appreciate you reading my poem. :)