Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes, I guess this Antonym encapsulates succinctly the cycle of life in this short poetic format before we inevitably succumb to death -thanks for sharing & a nice visual to illustrate

 Comment Written 31-May-2023

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reply by the author on 31-May-2023

Thank you very much. I am very glad that you enjoyed my little piece.

Comment from Andrea Kepple

Excellent

I like your poem. I like how you interpreted the guidelines for the poem challenge. You cover the "dash" in people's tombstones in this poem. Best of luck.

 Comment Written 30-May-2023

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reply by the author on 30-May-2023

Thank you for the compliment and for reviewing my work. I always love being able to give people something to think about when I write.

Comment from jessizero

Exceptional

This antonym poem was most impressive. I like all that happens between life and death. You chose your words well. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thank you so much for reviewing and for the beautiful rating! You are appreciated.

Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

Your wonderful theme resonates with the reader because you use such good descriptors to explain the human experience between life and death. Well done and good luck!

Melissa

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thank you so much for the kind review.