Voices
Musical Instruments28 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
Wow, Jim, I really enjoyed your poem and the comparison of the human voice in all of its levels to different types of musical instruments. Very creative and cleverly written. Good luck.
Melissa
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Wow, Jim, I really enjoyed your poem and the comparison of the human voice in all of its levels to different types of musical instruments. Very creative and cleverly written. Good luck.
Melissa
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thank you dear friend.
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading this very well written poem.
You really have described beautifully all aspects of music. A very good entry for the competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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I really enjoyed reading this very well written poem.
You really have described beautifully all aspects of music. A very good entry for the competition. Good luck and best wishes. Jen
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Jen, thank you so much!
Comment from Goodadvicechan
Good choice of the picture. I learn something everyday.
Thanks for telling us:" Choirs clearly produce sounds in twelve tones of music rounds in visual zones."
This piece is well written. G thanks for sharing
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Good choice of the picture. I learn something everyday.
Thanks for telling us:" Choirs clearly produce sounds in twelve tones of music rounds in visual zones."
This piece is well written. G thanks for sharing
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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G, thanks so much formyur kind comments.
Comment from Dawn Munro
"Talking, laughing, sobbing, screaming
Shouting, yelling, humming, or singing.
Projecting rich vibrato, whether
singing loud or soft as a feather.
Listen to Bass, Baritone, and Tenor voicing ...
Countertenor, Contralto, Alto; rejoicing,
when Mezzo-Soprano, Soprano blends in.
Hearing where the vocal sections' ends in."
Sorry to copy and paste two stanzas, but wow, I can almost 'hear' these, and of the whole poem, they're my favorite. Nicely done!
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"Talking, laughing, sobbing, screaming
Shouting, yelling, humming, or singing.
Projecting rich vibrato, whether
singing loud or soft as a feather.
Listen to Bass, Baritone, and Tenor voicing ...
Countertenor, Contralto, Alto; rejoicing,
when Mezzo-Soprano, Soprano blends in.
Hearing where the vocal sections' ends in."
Sorry to copy and paste two stanzas, but wow, I can almost 'hear' these, and of the whole poem, they're my favorite. Nicely done!
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Dawn, wow! Thank you!
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Very much my pleasure. :)
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Hurray for you for celebrating the human voice as musical instrument, not to be left out of this contest. You captured all the tones and textures of a singing voice and it reads well. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Hurray for you for celebrating the human voice as musical instrument, not to be left out of this contest. You captured all the tones and textures of a singing voice and it reads well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thank you so very much Ginda
Comment from Sally Law
Voices are the most beautiful to me. My mother had a beautiful voice and hummed and sang all the time. I get my alto voice from her. Wonderfully penned poem of the best instruments of praise.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Voices are the most beautiful to me. My mother had a beautiful voice and hummed and sang all the time. I get my alto voice from her. Wonderfully penned poem of the best instruments of praise.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sally :))
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thank you dear lady, Enjoy the Memorial weekend, although like us up in western NC its going to be a wet one.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is an excellent voice of the instrument's entry for the same name in the contest. I thought the rhyme scheme needed improvement as the fourth line of each stanza fell short of the feeling of the message.
Jesse
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This is an excellent voice of the instrument's entry for the same name in the contest. I thought the rhyme scheme needed improvement as the fourth line of each stanza fell short of the feeling of the message.
Jesse
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Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Jesse you maybe correct I wil look it over, I wanst trying to do a specifc abab rythmn scheme, my bad
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Glad I could help.
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I rewrote lines 3/4 on each Austrian, again thank you!
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Glad you rewrote lines 3 and 4 of the Austrian.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
Wow. Lead me, guide me, walk beside me. I'd go anywhere with you just to induce thoughts from your mind. This was genius. Well done. Lots of fun.
Have a grand day, as for me, I am on my way to the Planet - Fitness.
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Wow. Lead me, guide me, walk beside me. I'd go anywhere with you just to induce thoughts from your mind. This was genius. Well done. Lots of fun.
Have a grand day, as for me, I am on my way to the Planet - Fitness.
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Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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I am headed to the gardern jubliee befoe the rains hit....have a good Memorial Weeeknd.
