Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Excellent entry for the 1-6-1 poem writing prompt Contest.

I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize. The picture is so cute.

Good syllables count and connection between lines.

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 28-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

Thank you so much 🙂

Comment from sherrygreywolf

Excellent

Your poem has the correct syllable count and rhyming for the contest. And animals/birds are always a winning subject. Cute pic, by the way. Good job.

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 28-May-2023

Thank you so much 🙂

Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

Yes, it is sweet when two birds meet. I love how the birds talk to each other when they first meet they already know how to speak. That is the beauty of all birds. Thank you for writing about something I love and know a little about. I appreciate your knowledge.
Jesse

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thank you so much 🙂

Comment from James Hamill

Excellent

I thought this poem was quite "sweet"! (I'll show myself out, lol!) The beauty of it lies in its simplicity. Writing with such a strict syllable limitation isn't easy but reading this it feels like you're so skilled that it was a breeze for you. I really enjoyed this one. Great job!

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thank you so much 🙂

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao ,mystery poet,

I consider the shorter formats exciting challenges ..

and you passed with flying colours.

The rhyme word choice : tweet , meet , sweet, are not commonly used and it tells a cute story.

THIS is one of the more creative entries in the contest.

Well done !

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thank you so much 🙂

reply by tempeste on 27-May-2023

When I vote for a poem that wins I feel as if I won too ..I get all giddy. 😝

Comment from Andrea Kepple

Excellent

This is a sweet poem using the 1-6-1 format. Nice little image is painted especially in the spring when the nests have the new hatchlings. I enjoyed reading your poem.

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thank you so much 🙂

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The first two lines of this poem flow and connect well. The last line says it all! In a very short poem the author found the words to describe this scene so well. I think it is the sweetest! The artwork is perfect and goes well with the theme and words of this poem.
Have a great weekend!....Maria

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thank you Maria 🙂

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

This is indeed a sweet poem about a sweet encounter. Your example of a 1- 6 -1poem is a good one. I have not tried to write one, but you now inspire me. Thanks for sharing this with us. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thank you so much 🙂

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is a sweet and endearing write for the contest and appropriate for spring as these Chicks enjoy life and fill our hearts with love for them, a fine presentation, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thank you so much Dolly 🙂

Comment from Regina Elliott

Excellent

Dear Poet, baby chicks and
baby ducks are so darn cute.
They're some of the most
innocent of God's creation.
My very best wishes for the
contest. This is a worthy.
entry. Have a good holiday
weekend. ~

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 26-May-2023

Thank you so much for the great review appreciate it 🙂