Soaring high
Who needs wings? Reach for your dreams!18 total reviews
Comment from royowen
When I was a slip of a boy, I often had day dreams about being able to soar above the ground where I was safe and free from all trouble on the ground, and I outdone happily float up there. A beautifully written post my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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When I was a slip of a boy, I often had day dreams about being able to soar above the ground where I was safe and free from all trouble on the ground, and I outdone happily float up there. A beautifully written post my friend, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 28-May-2023
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Thank you so much for this. Much appreciated.
Comment from Andrea Kepple
The picture compliments your poem. Nice imagery used. You have communicated a good sentiment we should all carry with us throughout our lives. Good job.
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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The picture compliments your poem. Nice imagery used. You have communicated a good sentiment we should all carry with us throughout our lives. Good job.
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind rating and comments. Much appreciated.
Comment from jaded831
That looks like fun, hopefully she wanted to fly. Your poem is fun with a without the picture, so far your's is the best. But I need to read them all before voting. Good luck your poem should do well.
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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That looks like fun, hopefully she wanted to fly. Your poem is fun with a without the picture, so far your's is the best. But I need to read them all before voting. Good luck your poem should do well.
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind rating and comments. Much appreciated.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, descriptive and creative. I enjoyed
the uplifting read of this poem. The first two lines flow and connect
well. The last line says it all! The artwork is awesome and compliments
these words. Have a great weekend!...Maria
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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The author's words are engaging, descriptive and creative. I enjoyed
the uplifting read of this poem. The first two lines flow and connect
well. The last line says it all! The artwork is awesome and compliments
these words. Have a great weekend!...Maria
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind rating and comments. Much appreciated.
Comment from JT traveller
Your poem makes one ponder, how high is the sky? Fantastic illustration. A wonderful compliment to your poem. Ethereal, romantic. I loved it. Jacqueline
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Your poem makes one ponder, how high is the sky? Fantastic illustration. A wonderful compliment to your poem. Ethereal, romantic. I loved it. Jacqueline
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thank you so much for your kind rating and comments. Much appreciated.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed your matching rhymes here and your uplifting flight into the sky here, we all like to have wings and good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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I enjoyed your matching rhymes here and your uplifting flight into the sky here, we all like to have wings and good luck with the contest, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thank you so much for this!
Comment from Sally Law
Mystery poet, you did a great job with this very difficult 1-6-1 poetry form. The art complemented your short verse so nicely.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes in the contest.
Sally Law :))
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reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Mystery poet, you did a great job with this very difficult 1-6-1 poetry form. The art complemented your short verse so nicely.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes in the contest.
Sally Law :))
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Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Sally! Your rating and review are much appreciated.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
I am totally with you as you fly your way high in pursuit of dreams. Who needs wings? This is a great poem for the 1-6-1 contest. May I suggest a larger font if using white as it is hard to read, or possibly a slightly darker blue background.
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reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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I am totally with you as you fly your way high in pursuit of dreams. Who needs wings? This is a great poem for the 1-6-1 contest. May I suggest a larger font if using white as it is hard to read, or possibly a slightly darker blue background.
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Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Thank you so much, Ginda, for your kind rating and lovely comments. Absolutely agree on your suggestion but computer has been a nightmare! Have now returned to black font but at least have it centred. Best wishes.
