Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

An excellent challenge to all would-be writers, to no longer procrastinate but to work diligently to make their dreams a reality. Well writtena nd well presented. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thanks so much!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Love this inventive and clever post, we must never hesitate when it comes to writing stories or poems, we never know when the chance to write again is gone, la poignant write, one of the best I have read so far, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thanks so much!

Comment from jake cosmos aller

Excellent

nicely done 1 6 1 poem you nailed the form and had a profound message in the 8 words of the poem. Indeed one should pen one's dreams and if not now, when?

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 26-May-2023

Thanks so much!

Comment from Pam Lonsdale

Excellent

I have not previously heard of the 1-6-1 poem. This may be one of the most challenging poetry forms I've seen.

I wish you good luck in the contest - you've summed up the feelings for many of us who "pen our dreams".

Pam

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 26-May-2023

Thanks so much!

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

I LOVE you poem. This is a philosophy I live by. If not now, then when. That goes for writing and for pursuing dreams, both big and small. Never put off what brings you joy.

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 26-May-2023

Thanks so much, Ginda!!

Comment from RodG

Excellent

I believe many writers on this site would agree with the Speaker. Too often writers procrastinate or make excuses for not "penning" their dreams. Your message comes through loud and clear. Rod

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 26-May-2023

Thanks so much, Rod!!

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Exceptional

You meet the requirements of 1-6-1.

I like you start your first sentence with pen and it rhymes with "then."

Pen is a powerful verb. Pen your dream to me means you can dream of anything now.., At times, I'd like to dream of being together with my wife at heaven...

Your ending word of "what" is a good choice.

Good luck to your contest

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 26-May-2023

Hello Chan... thanks so much!!

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Great image! And well constructed verse to match. Full of dreams and inspiration, inviting the reader to use their imagination in writing! Well done! A strong contender! Good luck! Debbie

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 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 26-May-2023

Thank you Debbie!!

Comment from royowen

Excellent

You've done a great job in scribing and rhyming this great 1/6/1 poetic entry in this contest. Yep, dreams are important, they can lead to a marvellous future, beautifully written my friend, good luck, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 26-May-2023

Thank you Roy!

reply by royowen on 26-May-2023

Most welcome