Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Hi,
This poem encourages us to follow our dreams in writing and in life in this mono-rhyme entry in the 1-6-1 contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Good luck in the contest.
Enjoy your weekend.
Joan

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thanks so much, Joan!

reply by dragonpoet on 27-May-2023

You are most kindly welcome.
Joan

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

Your well chosen words provides exceptional advice for all writers, be biographical, fiction, or poetry. We all have ideas floating around in our mind. Your question is thought-provoking. When? Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thanks so much!

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 1-6-1, Pen Your Dreams, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that two years from now they will have something published or not, but they will be two years older.

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thanks so much, Bill!

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an meaningful 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with excellent grammatical connection of lines
and three smooth rhymes that are not forced.
Good choice of art work to match the theme.
The best one I've read so far.
Well done.
Best wishes.
Robert

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thanks so much, Robert!

Comment from harmony13

Excellent

The author's words are thought provoking, meaningful and creative. The first two lines of this poem flow n connect well. The last line says it all!
I found the author's words have a great message! The artwork is awesome
and compliments these words. Have a great weekend!...Maria

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thanks so much, Maria!

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

Wow, what a marvelous, tiny poem and your choice of artwork is stunning. Indeed, now IS the time to write what we dream about, but also, to work towards our goals.
Nicely done -- a clever double-meaning. :)

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

thanks so very much Dawn!

Comment from tempeste

Exceptional

Ciao Sugarray!

The beautiful artwork drew me in and illustrates well your poem.

I just read recently that writing down one's dreams on a paper makes our brain get busy thinking how we can achieve our goal.

We should write a letter to our future self and write eg;

By the end of 2023 I will have my driver's license.

It also pointed out to not write : I hope , I will try to get my license.

To avoid doubt hence failure , we should put :

I WILL HAVE my licence ..

That way our brain is spurred to find away to make it happen.

I thought you were very creative in this challenging format.

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thank you Franca! I think we have to be intentional and penning our dreams is a very positive way to achieve many different goals. I really appreciate your take on this very short verse :). Hugs!!

reply by tempeste on 27-May-2023

Ciao !
you now have 6 votes.😐

reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thanks you sweet Franca!!

reply by tempeste on 27-May-2023

I?m glad to see you back posting ..

Keep safe ! 🍀

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Great artwork and nice presentation.
-The syllable count is good, along with the topic.
-Good use of rhyme and a very good message
about penning your dreams so they are not forgotten.
-A very good entry; good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thanks so much Pam!

reply by Pam (respa) on 27-May-2023

You are very welcome.

Comment from Jesse James Doty

Excellent

This entry into the contest is well done and follows all the rules by rhyming the end words and developing a concept of penning your dreams which is a wonderful message. This shares a dream of mine to write down all the dreams I have had the night before. Thanks for sharing and may you do well in the contest.
Jesse

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thanks so much Jesse!

reply by Jesse James Doty on 27-May-2023

You're welcome.

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello, Mystery Writer!
So perceptive!
I do attempt to record my dreams by keeping my phone next to my bedside, but a tad bit difficult not to awake my husband! Oh! But sometimes, those dreams are so vivid and do transfer to my poetry.

Well-stated with creativity and flair!

Best Wishes!
diane

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

Thanks so much, Diane!