Comment from Paul McFarland

Excellent

This is a very nice Haiku, Darla. I don't do very well in judging Haikus, but this one has a nice picture to go with it. I am waiting for one of your longer poems.

 Comment Written 27-May-2023

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reply by the author on 27-May-2023

I have not written anymore. Fanstory has not asked for anymore.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful and well written 3-5-3 nature poem you have penned for the writing prompt. Beautiful picture of the blue butterfly. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 26-May-2023

Thanks, who did you vote for in the 50 word contest?

reply by Teri7 on 26-May-2023

I think it was yours. At that point it was three votes with mine!

Comment from Mario PIERRE

Excellent

It's always good to read poems about nature or the natural beauty of animals and God's majestic creation. You laid it down in all simplicity and that's what make it powerful.
Good luck with the contest!!

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 26-May-2023

Thanks!

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

These are the delights of spring and summer, although I have not seen a butterfly yet, a fine post for the nature 3-5-3, good luck, love Dolly x x x x

 Comment Written 26-May-2023

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reply by the author on 26-May-2023

Thanks!