Flub-a-Dub-in-a-Tub
Me taking my first solo bath ...9 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Tom,
Ha ha. The mom should have known he wasn't old enough to do it on his own. I guess freedom made him do things he wouldn't normally do.
Was the artwork supplied for you to write about.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Hi Tom,
Ha ha. The mom should have known he wasn't old enough to do it on his own. I guess freedom made him do things he wouldn't normally do.
Was the artwork supplied for you to write about.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a great weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 27-May-2023
reply by the author on 27-May-2023
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Nah. The photo was hunted and discovered on Pexels.com I think I stated or Upsplash. Thanks for the review.
Comment from lyenochka
Oh dear! Poor Mother! I guess there's always a first time and many more firsts to work on becoming fully independent and capable! Fun story. Glad you chose the before not after picture. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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Oh dear! Poor Mother! I guess there's always a first time and many more firsts to work on becoming fully independent and capable! Fun story. Glad you chose the before not after picture. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
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I am related such a scene regularly, opposite the boy and his puddle, of a aged man waddling to the shower leaving wet spots on the floor before he gets drippy wet, by his missus.
Comment from jessizero
This was such a cute and funny story! I am sorry you only had eighty words, because I would have loved to have read the rest of it! LOL. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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This was such a cute and funny story! I am sorry you only had eighty words, because I would have loved to have read the rest of it! LOL. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Ummm. Eighty words was sufficient
The aftermath is R -rated🤡
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Oh! Well, in that case, thanks for sparing me. :)
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Ummm. Eighty words was sufficient
The aftermath is R -rated🤡
Comment from royowen
Heh heh, although it says fiction at the top, this apparently was true. What a surprise, apparently a young boy was probably innocent at this juncture, what a shock, and it was you! And I believe it, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Heh heh, although it says fiction at the top, this apparently was true. What a surprise, apparently a young boy was probably innocent at this juncture, what a shock, and it was you! And I believe it, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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I Better leave your comment unanswered
Five sisters might contest its verscity
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Heh heh, I see it all?said the blind man.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, you never know what boys are going to do next. And some of us were the worst. I know I was, and I'm guessing you were probably a handful too. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Yes, you never know what boys are going to do next. And some of us were the worst. I know I was, and I'm guessing you were probably a handful too. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Nah. I had five sisters. Couldn't do a thing without getting blamed even when one of their posse did the crime.
Comment from BethShelby
Lol It sounds like at five you were concernted more with you mom's welfare than your own modesty, which likely you didn't have, since she already seen your snow white buns.
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Lol It sounds like at five you were concernted more with you mom's welfare than your own modesty, which likely you didn't have, since she already seen your snow white buns.
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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I'm simply having fun originating my own world of writing. Even I know not what's to come.
Comment from BermyBye50
Tom,
This is an excellent entry in the 80 Word Flash Fiction contest. It is full of boyhood enthusiasm and fun. The twist of humor at the end is brilliant and clearly realistic as it is exactly what a young boy would say to keep Mom from coming into the bathroom. Well done.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Tom,
This is an excellent entry in the 80 Word Flash Fiction contest. It is full of boyhood enthusiasm and fun. The twist of humor at the end is brilliant and clearly realistic as it is exactly what a young boy would say to keep Mom from coming into the bathroom. Well done.
All the best in the contest,
Eugene
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Thanks. Now, I await your latest releases, for likely there will be two.
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Thanks. Now, I await your latest releases, for likely there will be two.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A great title to accompany a funny childhood story.
No quite the big boy yet.
Delightful and fun to read particularly at 3 AM.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes
Mary
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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A great title to accompany a funny childhood story.
No quite the big boy yet.
Delightful and fun to read particularly at 3 AM.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes
Mary
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Nice to have friends on one's side. Appreciate you!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh dear, you didn't quite get it right here, but better luck next time. Childhood memories still with you here Tom, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Oh dear, you didn't quite get it right here, but better luck next time. Childhood memories still with you here Tom, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
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Not right? What did I do that falls short?
