Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

This is funny! I love the punch line! It gave me a good chuckle to start the day.
Writing a story in just 50 words is difficult, but you pulled it off brilliantly.
Best wishes
Mary

 Comment Written 31-May-2023

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reply by the author on 31-May-2023

I'm pleased you got a chuckle out of this. Thanks for your review!

Comment from Kaiku

Excellent

Cute. A nice prolonged chuckle ensued as I read the ending. It is quite fun to read these short 50 word stories as they are quite amusing and well written. Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 25-May-2023

Comment from jbannon

Excellent

You did a great job! Such a cute little story that made me laugh. I thought about entering the contest but couldn't come up with an idea. Good luck and thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 24-May-2023

Comment from Alexandra Trovato

Excellent

That's very funny cute story for the 50 words. it's very creative. Just the right amount of description words are used at the reader could also Imagine the scene. Most importantly the whole concept was funny. The image that went with the story is very cute and helps with the story. Best wishes!

 Comment Written 24-May-2023