Comment from mkflood

Excellent

lol..love the ending. i do thank you for selecting my work to be presented with your story. it works together. i have been a Fanstory standard member since 2011 but a long time premium member on the FanArtReview side. i do make available over 1200 illustrations and cartoons for you writers here on the Fanstory to use with your posts.. i do thank you for allowing us lowly standard members to offer a response to your post. many of the other FS members will shut us out and allow Premier members only. Aint that a hoot! those individuals will use my work and then they shut me out of just saying hey and thank you. you did a great job on the story and thank you for allow me to say it. wink

MKFLOOD

 Comment Written 24-May-2023

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reply by the author on 24-May-2023

Thank you so much. You are and have always been my favourite guy on FanArt. So talented.

reply by mkflood on 24-May-2023

hey you know cause of the blind thingy. so if and when your on the FAR side after this contest ...say hey and lemme know it was you (thumbs up)

reply by the author on 24-May-2023

Sure😍

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

lol funny little flash joke...
nice use of the 50 words

Very well thanks Tom <-- i think you need commas after 'well' and after 'tom'

nice work - thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
shelley :)

 Comment Written 24-May-2023

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reply by the author on 24-May-2023

Thanks so much for the review and spotting my mistakes. Have a nice day.

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This story was so cute! It was funny, as I'm sure you know. You managed to pull it off in just fifty words. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 24-May-2023

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reply by the author on 24-May-2023

Thanks. Glad you like it.