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Never Again

Not fun to take a life.

3 total reviews 
Comment from patricia dillon
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

This sounds like a personal experience. I don't know whether it was or not but it was very touching. You successfully told a complete story in fifty words,

 Comment Written 26-May-2023


reply by the author on 26-May-2023
    You guessed it. Have never gone hunting in my life. Thanks for the read and the six star award. Appreciated.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Excellent
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If only others could feel that emotion before using any kind of weapon that injures or kills. You not only successfully wrote a complete story in fifty words, but you delivered an important message. Well done!

 Comment Written 24-May-2023


reply by the author on 24-May-2023
    Could not agree with you more. Thanks for the read and the encouraging review.
Comment from jessizero
Excellent
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This was a nice piece of flash in fifty words. I can understand how the boy was so upset that he never touched his gun again. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 24-May-2023


reply by the author on 24-May-2023
    Thanks for the read and the encouraging review.