The Blind Date
50 Word Story contest entry5 total reviews
Comment from Regina Elliott
Hi Dragon Skulls, this is a
superb 50 word flash fiction.
I love the humor. One time,
on another poetry website,
a man poet just started acting
romantic towards me. All I had to write back was, "I'm
older, and I look like something the cat dragged in." Well, that made Romeo
back off, lol! Have a creative
upcoming week. ~
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
  |
Hi Dragon Skulls, this is a
superb 50 word flash fiction.
I love the humor. One time,
on another poetry website,
a man poet just started acting
romantic towards me. All I had to write back was, "I'm
older, and I look like something the cat dragged in." Well, that made Romeo
back off, lol! Have a creative
upcoming week. ~
Comment Written 11-Jun-2023
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2023
-
Lol. Thank you for the great review, Regina. Yeah, there's guys out there who do that kind of stuff. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a wonderful week as well and thank you again.
=]
Ron
Comment from PoemsOfDD
LOL - I really laughed out loud on this one.
Thank you for putting a smile on my face with this funny little 50 word story. Great punch line. I hope it does well ;-)
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
|
LOL - I really laughed out loud on this one.
Thank you for putting a smile on my face with this funny little 50 word story. Great punch line. I hope it does well ;-)
Comment Written 26-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
-
Thank you for the great review, PODD. I appreciate the stars and good luck wishes. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly piece. Have yourself a great weekend.
Comment from Kaiku
This is good, however, the way it reads, your date is blind. I am thinking that you may have initially written 'on a blind date' then took out the word 'on' to hit 50 words. It then reads 'a blind date'. Maybe just me. Funny write. Good job.
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
|
This is good, however, the way it reads, your date is blind. I am thinking that you may have initially written 'on a blind date' then took out the word 'on' to hit 50 words. It then reads 'a blind date'. Maybe just me. Funny write. Good job.
Comment Written 25-May-2023
reply by the author on 26-May-2023
-
Lol. That's exactly why. Thank you for the great review and stars, Kaiku. I figure if she knew her was an ugly mug then she could see him. Haha. I appreciate it, friend. I'm glad you liked this silliness.
Comment from papa55mike
At least you wrote what your heart was saying. That's important and stay true to yourself. What a wonderfully written little story with a good twist.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
|
At least you wrote what your heart was saying. That's important and stay true to yourself. What a wonderfully written little story with a good twist.
Good luck in the contest!
Have a great day, and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 24-May-2023
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
-
Thank you for the great review and good luck wishes, Mike. I'm glad you liked this silly piece. Have yourself a great night.
Comment from jessizero
I laughed so hard at this "story!" It really made some good points, and I liked your conclusion. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
|
I laughed so hard at this "story!" It really made some good points, and I liked your conclusion. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 24-May-2023
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
-
Thank you for the great review and stars, Jessi. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silliness.
