The Nighttime Ninja
50 words9 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This fifty-word story, The Nighttime Ninja, has the proper word count and has the confession straight from the raccoon's mouth that he indeed is the dreaded Nighttime Ninja. Be afraid.
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This fifty-word story, The Nighttime Ninja, has the proper word count and has the confession straight from the raccoon's mouth that he indeed is the dreaded Nighttime Ninja. Be afraid.
Comment Written 26-May-2023
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
So much done in so few words! Impressive video and I enjoyed your vivid and slightly humorous description of the 'nighttime ninja.' with his greedy and predatory instincts until someone bigger comes along. You might want to correct 'releive' to 'relieve.' An excellent post and good contender! Good luck! Debbie
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So much done in so few words! Impressive video and I enjoyed your vivid and slightly humorous description of the 'nighttime ninja.' with his greedy and predatory instincts until someone bigger comes along. You might want to correct 'releive' to 'relieve.' An excellent post and good contender! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 26-May-2023
Comment from PoemsOfDD
This is an imaginative entry for the 50 word flash writing prompt. I like the use of a moving picture to enhance the story. Sneaky little ninja that it is - but I guess one has to try any measure to survive this world. A fun story. Best of luck in the competition.
PS - slight typo to edit - I relieve other creatures - (not releive)
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This is an imaginative entry for the 50 word flash writing prompt. I like the use of a moving picture to enhance the story. Sneaky little ninja that it is - but I guess one has to try any measure to survive this world. A fun story. Best of luck in the competition.
PS - slight typo to edit - I relieve other creatures - (not releive)
Comment Written 26-May-2023
Comment from lancellot
Good idea. This has a strong presentation and the main character of a coon is one that will get many right in that soft spot.
Now, is this actually a complete story. Maybe, it did make it into the voting booth.
Good luck to you.
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Good idea. This has a strong presentation and the main character of a coon is one that will get many right in that soft spot.
Now, is this actually a complete story. Maybe, it did make it into the voting booth.
Good luck to you.
Comment Written 25-May-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
The flash fiction story grabbed my interest and the dialogue is believable. It's a good entry for the 50 Word Flash writing prompt contest. It's kind of creepy.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
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The flash fiction story grabbed my interest and the dialogue is believable. It's a good entry for the 50 Word Flash writing prompt contest. It's kind of creepy.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 25-May-2023
Comment from Sugarray77
Hi. You have done a good job in developing a vivid and interesting piece for this 50 Word Flash. Hard to do with such constraints. Well done and I wish you good luck in the contest!
Melissa
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Hi. You have done a good job in developing a vivid and interesting piece for this 50 Word Flash. Hard to do with such constraints. Well done and I wish you good luck in the contest!
Melissa
Comment Written 25-May-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile here as these large rodents are in charge of the streets and steal food when they can. We humans leave enough waste to feed a zoo! A fun write for the contest, love Dolly x
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You made me smile here as these large rodents are in charge of the streets and steal food when they can. We humans leave enough waste to feed a zoo! A fun write for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-May-2023
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Arrogance and bravery are limited to size in this brief story. It is well written within the fifty word count. You have used good description and the story flows smoothly. Good luck in the contest.
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Arrogance and bravery are limited to size in this brief story. It is well written within the fifty word count. You have used good description and the story flows smoothly. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-May-2023
Comment from jessizero
This "nighttime ninja" story was a cute narrative of a raccoon. I got a kick out of it. The last sentence was hilarious. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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This "nighttime ninja" story was a cute narrative of a raccoon. I got a kick out of it. The last sentence was hilarious. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 24-May-2023
