Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was cute. I never would have seen that ending coming from where the story began. Thank you so much for sharing your story, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 24-May-2023

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reply by the author on 24-May-2023

Thank you so much!

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

Adam just might win!!! If not, he is at least exercising his composition muscles and working towards his writing goals. Improving all the time. Sergeant can back off.

 Comment Written 24-May-2023

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reply by the author on 24-May-2023

Thank you!