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One Step

a 5-7-5

6 total reviews 
Comment from PoemsOfDD
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CONGRATULATIONS on a fine win. This is a very inspirations entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. An obvious winner so well done. A beautiful photo to enhance the motivational words written. Excellent work :-)

 Comment Written 25-May-2023

reply by the author on 26-May-2023
    Hi DD. Thank you so very much for your lovely review on 'One Step'... I wanted to share with the readers that our future is unblemished and just waiting for us to step into it :). So appreciate your comments!!

    Melissa
Comment from Sally Law
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Ah, Melissa, this is fantastic! Beautifully penned and illustrated of the clean slate we get the day we are born again! Congratulations on your ribbon too! Sending you my best today as always,
Sal XOs

 Comment Written 25-May-2023

reply by the author on 25-May-2023
    Hello Sally. Thank you very much. I'm glad you like it and see like I do "all our sins are washed away" and the future is clean. Hugs!!

    Melissa
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
    Hello Sally. Thank you very much. I'm glad you like it and see like I do "all our sins are washed away" and the future is clean. Hugs!!

    Melissa
reply by the author on 25-May-2023
    Hello Sally. Thank you very much. I'm glad you like it and see like I do "all our sins are washed away" and the future is clean. Hugs!!

    Melissa
Comment from Mia Twysted
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You tell the reader to keep going forward. That is a good message as sometimes to get to where you want to be you must keep moving forward. You must hope for your future.

 Comment Written 24-May-2023

reply by the author on 24-May-2023
    Thanks so much.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Nice haiku entry for the Faith 5-7-5 writing prompt contest.

I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.

Good syllables count and connection between lines.

Good luck in the contest.

Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis

 Comment Written 24-May-2023

reply by the author on 24-May-2023
    Thanks so much Gypsy!
Comment from Debra White
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Hello :)
I enjoyed reading your poem.
That first step of faith is the hardest one to take.... but that future makes it worth it.
I love the enjambment between line one and two, creating smooth phrasing. The presentation is lovely - picture perfect for your words.
Good luck in the contest.
Best wishes, Debra :)

 Comment Written 24-May-2023

reply by the author on 24-May-2023
    Thank you Debra!
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
    Thank you Debra!
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
    Thank you Debra!
Comment from Ginda Simpson
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I love the message and the image you have chosen for your poem. Faith and trust go hand and hand as we enter our future. It is up to us what we do with that blank, unblemished page. Beautiful poem.

 Comment Written 24-May-2023

reply by the author on 24-May-2023
    Thank you Ginda!
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
    Thank you Ginda!
reply by the author on 24-May-2023
    Thank you Ginda!