Why Should I Listen?
Kids don't always understand3 total reviews
Comment from Doc Fin
Dark humor! I love it! I especially enjoyed the way you set the tone for the whole essay with that one sentence at the end. Kind of like laughing at a funeral, which feels so good.
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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Dark humor! I love it! I especially enjoyed the way you set the tone for the whole essay with that one sentence at the end. Kind of like laughing at a funeral, which feels so good.
Comment Written 23-May-2023
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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Thank you! I am so glad that you enjoyed this little lesson. I appreciate your taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from LisaMay
Well, Tommy sure learned the hard way! Your story is well told, with the final paragraph tying the lesson together very effectively. It seems that people who think they are careful often end up on youtube Fails of the Week.
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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Well, Tommy sure learned the hard way! Your story is well told, with the final paragraph tying the lesson together very effectively. It seems that people who think they are careful often end up on youtube Fails of the Week.
Comment Written 23-May-2023
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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Thanks for reviewing. I never heard of that program, but I will definitely be checking it out. Thank you for the info.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh my goodness this is a shocking write filled with the consequences of not listening to your Mother here, a poignant and sad post for the prompt, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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Oh my goodness this is a shocking write filled with the consequences of not listening to your Mother here, a poignant and sad post for the prompt, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-May-2023
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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Yes, sadly when children don't listen there can be horrible consequences. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
