One Drink Too Many
100 words5 total reviews
Comment from jessizero
That last drink caused a lot of trouble! I enjoyed your 100 word story. It was funny. Thank you so much for sharing this story, and best wishes to you.
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That last drink caused a lot of trouble! I enjoyed your 100 word story. It was funny. Thank you so much for sharing this story, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 23-May-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Good entry for the 100 Word Flash writing prompt contest. Good flash fiction form and word count. Nice presentation.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
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Good entry for the 100 Word Flash writing prompt contest. Good flash fiction form and word count. Nice presentation.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 23-May-2023
Comment from Mario PIERRE
This was hilarious. I can understand the feeling of keeping it, keeping it, the atmosphere doesn't want me to go...and yes, finally nature has the last word! Beautifully written with a final twist.
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This was hilarious. I can understand the feeling of keeping it, keeping it, the atmosphere doesn't want me to go...and yes, finally nature has the last word! Beautifully written with a final twist.
Comment Written 23-May-2023
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Too much alcohol can cause all sorts of problems with health in mind and body and we never seem to learn when it comes to hitting the bottle, a poignant write, love Dolly x
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Too much alcohol can cause all sorts of problems with health in mind and body and we never seem to learn when it comes to hitting the bottle, a poignant write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-May-2023
Comment from Bill Schott
This one-hundred-word story, One Drink too Many, has the proper word count and brings Jack's bladder into the story as his drinking sends him to the lavatory for immediate draining.
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This one-hundred-word story, One Drink too Many, has the proper word count and brings Jack's bladder into the story as his drinking sends him to the lavatory for immediate draining.
Comment Written 22-May-2023
