Guided by Faith
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Comment from Jay Squires
Now I'm wondering if there is something going on in Emma's mind that comes from something other than strict, or old-fashioned upbringing. To me (and I've been wrong before) it seems that too much is being made of using one's first name. That is the reason I am being led to believe something might have happened in Emma's past that keeps her away from developing relationships.
Jay
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Now I'm wondering if there is something going on in Emma's mind that comes from something other than strict, or old-fashioned upbringing. To me (and I've been wrong before) it seems that too much is being made of using one's first name. That is the reason I am being led to believe something might have happened in Emma's past that keeps her away from developing relationships.
Jay
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Hmm, we'll see. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Shirley McLain
I'm glad I don't get bad sunburns anymore. I went scuba diving one time in Hawaii and came up before everyone else, and my burn was so bad my skin turned gray. I missed work. You did a great job as always. Have a wonderful Sunday evening. Shirley
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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I'm glad I don't get bad sunburns anymore. I went scuba diving one time in Hawaii and came up before everyone else, and my burn was so bad my skin turned gray. I missed work. You did a great job as always. Have a wonderful Sunday evening. Shirley
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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I've only had one really bad sunburn. I was in Spain. Normally, I didn't burn so I was really surprised. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Teri7
This is very interesting and well written as always. I did not see any spag or error. I am with you and Seth. Why didn't she answer him? Maybe she has a dark secret she doesn't want exposed in that town. Great job as always! love and blessings, teri
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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This is very interesting and well written as always. I did not see any spag or error. I am with you and Seth. Why didn't she answer him? Maybe she has a dark secret she doesn't want exposed in that town. Great job as always! love and blessings, teri
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from jmdg1954
You are doing an excellent performance with these two.
Seth wants to use first names. I see nothing wrong, misleading, romantic about it. It's their names. Calling him Chief is a matter of respect for his position, but he sees her multiple times daily. Now she's willingly rubbing his back with aloe. He tenuously pulls up his shirt with respect for her.
Nothing wrong using a persons name... but we'll see.
Good chapter!
Cheers...
John
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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You are doing an excellent performance with these two.
Seth wants to use first names. I see nothing wrong, misleading, romantic about it. It's their names. Calling him Chief is a matter of respect for his position, but he sees her multiple times daily. Now she's willingly rubbing his back with aloe. He tenuously pulls up his shirt with respect for her.
Nothing wrong using a persons name... but we'll see.
Good chapter!
Cheers...
John
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from royowen
Temptation when one is Christian are prolific, especially if one is young and attractive, and playing nurse to an attractive male sherrif would be just the same. But I'm sure they'll keep their temptation at bay for longer I'm sure, this is beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : for the kids attending (the) reading program.
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Temptation when one is Christian are prolific, especially if one is young and attractive, and playing nurse to an attractive male sherrif would be just the same. But I'm sure they'll keep their temptation at bay for longer I'm sure, this is beautifully written, blessings Roy
Typo : for the kids attending (the) reading program.
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Thank you for the catch. I added that missing word. I always appreciate the help.
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My pleasure
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Emma is so busy with her own life it seems/the shy girl will blossom in time and let others into her life as she matures. She is fond of Seth, but probably she has doubts about him, yet.
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Emma is so busy with her own life it seems/the shy girl will blossom in time and let others into her life as she matures. She is fond of Seth, but probably she has doubts about him, yet.
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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She does have doubts. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from BethShelby
I'm not sure why it would bother Emma to use first names with Seth. I guess we'll learn in time. She doesn't seem to mind rubbing aloe on his back. There seems pretty informal. I'm enjoying to story and looking forward to findiing out who is the parked can and how Emma will react when she learns, she adopted.
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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I'm not sure why it would bother Emma to use first names with Seth. I guess we'll learn in time. She doesn't seem to mind rubbing aloe on his back. There seems pretty informal. I'm enjoying to story and looking forward to findiing out who is the parked can and how Emma will react when she learns, she adopted.
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sankey
Nice, gentle read, today. Emma not answering Seth's question and she looking after his burns. One spag...In chapter title...Seth suggests they (use)each other's first names.
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Nice, gentle read, today. Emma not answering Seth's question and she looking after his burns. One spag...In chapter title...Seth suggests they (use)each other's first names.
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Thank you for the catch. I will fix that. I always appreciate help.
Comment from nomi338
Hmm, is Emma feeling a bit uncomfortable at the increasing level of intimacy between she and Seth? If she feel that things are moving too fast, is it because she is afraid of falling of the cliff and it be a one way fall? It seems pretty clear to me that Seth is all in.
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Hmm, is Emma feeling a bit uncomfortable at the increasing level of intimacy between she and Seth? If she feel that things are moving too fast, is it because she is afraid of falling of the cliff and it be a one way fall? It seems pretty clear to me that Seth is all in.
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I didn't realize it has only been ten days since Emma and Seth met. Their relationship is moving right along. The story reminded me participating in church events.
Well done, another enjoyable chapter.
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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I didn't realize it has only been ten days since Emma and Seth met. Their relationship is moving right along. The story reminded me participating in church events.
Well done, another enjoyable chapter.
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, when I only post once a week, we lose track of time. I add it because people want the relationship to move faster, but when it's only ten days, it's moving fast enough.
