Peril
Short, free verse poem2 total reviews
Comment from Ginda Simpson
Good questions raised in your poem. It carries the frustration of indecision. There is always a new path forward, but we don't always see it. Until we clear our thinking. I really like what you have written.
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Good questions raised in your poem. It carries the frustration of indecision. There is always a new path forward, but we don't always see it. Until we clear our thinking. I really like what you have written.
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Aiona
I don't normally care for free verse, but this poem is succinct and it really does describe true peril. Being stuck between a hard place and a rock. It really describes the feeling, and could almost trigger PTSD, except I'm smiling right now.
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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I don't normally care for free verse, but this poem is succinct and it really does describe true peril. Being stuck between a hard place and a rock. It really describes the feeling, and could almost trigger PTSD, except I'm smiling right now.
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Thank you for your review. I'm glad it left you with a smile and not a triggered episode.
