So many gifts
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Comment from Faith Williams
Most people look forward to gifts. I like your idea of viewing each day as a gift unwrapping it with an attitude of gratitude. Though the last line can be hard to follow through at times. I'm grateful none of you were injured in the accident. Thanks for sharing your reminder.
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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Most people look forward to gifts. I like your idea of viewing each day as a gift unwrapping it with an attitude of gratitude. Though the last line can be hard to follow through at times. I'm grateful none of you were injured in the accident. Thanks for sharing your reminder.
Comment Written 23-May-2023
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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Thank you very much Faith, for this lovely review. Yes, the third line is quite frequently a challenge.
Wendy
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, So Many Gifts, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that each day presents us with another day to fix, repair, replay, or even better, proceed.
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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This 5-7-5, So Many Gifts, has the proper formatting and reminds the readers that each day presents us with another day to fix, repair, replay, or even better, proceed.
Comment Written 23-May-2023
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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Thank you Bill. I appreciate your review. Wendy
Comment from harmony13
I liked the theme of this poem. I agree with the author each day is a gift.
Thank you for the author's notes -I liked the reminder you put in these notes! I believe each day is a gift from God. I liked how the author states "Unwrap it with grateful thanks". The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem well.
Hi Wendy, glad everyone is okay - have a good week!....Maria
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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I liked the theme of this poem. I agree with the author each day is a gift.
Thank you for the author's notes -I liked the reminder you put in these notes! I believe each day is a gift from God. I liked how the author states "Unwrap it with grateful thanks". The artwork is awesome and compliments this poem well.
Hi Wendy, glad everyone is okay - have a good week!....Maria
Comment Written 22-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Thank you very much Maria. What a lovely review! Wendy
Comment from jaded831
So many people take each new day for granted. Thank you for reminding us to appreciate life. I truly enjoyed the read. Each day should feel like Christmas. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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So many people take each new day for granted. Thank you for reminding us to appreciate life. I truly enjoyed the read. Each day should feel like Christmas. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 22-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your review. Yes, each day needs to be valued as we never know how many more we?ll have.
Comment from sherrygreywolf
Very thought-provoking entry into the 5-7-5 poetry contest, made more so by the author's notes. I'm glad everyone was ok after your accident. Correct syllable count for the contest. Good job.
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Very thought-provoking entry into the 5-7-5 poetry contest, made more so by the author's notes. I'm glad everyone was ok after your accident. Correct syllable count for the contest. Good job.
Comment Written 22-May-2023
reply by the author on 22-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your positive aand thoughtful review. I appreciate it a lot.
Comment from jessizero
I am so glad you, your granddaughter, and dog were not harmed! I do like your poem, as well. It's a great sentiment. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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I am so glad you, your granddaughter, and dog were not harmed! I do like your poem, as well. It's a great sentiment. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Thank you very much for your kind and thoughtful review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poem writing prompt contest.
I like the presentation and word imagery. Concrete images of the gifts easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Excellent entry for the 5-7-5 Poem writing prompt contest.
I like the presentation and word imagery. Concrete images of the gifts easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Good luck in the contest.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Thank you for the thoughtful review and good wishes.
Comment from Andrea Kepple
This is a great attitude we should all take into each day. At least we have another day to explore and learn from. A lot of what we get out of the day is the attitude we approach that day with.
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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This is a great attitude we should all take into each day. At least we have another day to explore and learn from. A lot of what we get out of the day is the attitude we approach that day with.
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Exactly right. A super review. Thank you.
Comment from Ginda Simpson
You have written a lovely poem that reminds us to open the gift that each day is. And to be grateful for what it offers us. Glad you escaped harm in the accident. Thanks for sharing this with us.
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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You have written a lovely poem that reminds us to open the gift that each day is. And to be grateful for what it offers us. Glad you escaped harm in the accident. Thanks for sharing this with us.
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Thank you very much, Ginda, for this lovely review. Appreciated.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Lovely uplifting sentiments in this 5-7-5 poem. The message to be grateful for each new day is a strong one that resonates well with me (although I sometimes forget!) This could equally be 'a poem in your pocket.' Syllable count in order. Good to go. Well done. Debbie
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reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Lovely uplifting sentiments in this 5-7-5 poem. The message to be grateful for each new day is a strong one that resonates well with me (although I sometimes forget!) This could equally be 'a poem in your pocket.' Syllable count in order. Good to go. Well done. Debbie
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Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Good idea to have a little poem in one?s pocket! We all need a little reminder. Thank you for such a lovely review.
