Defeating Death?
A True Life Loop form Poem.3 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Again, thank you for sharing.
God, does Love you! (no comma after God here)
Okay God, Eye fid as You instructed me too. (fid?)
Please son don't you cry. (comma after 'son')
God are you listening yo my prayers? (comma after 'God' and 'listening to')
I've been doing this now for 7,355 daya! (days)
...
It's okay Jay. (comma after 'okay')
Simmrr fown. ('Simmer' & 'down')
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
Again, thank you for sharing.
God, does Love you! (no comma after God here)
Okay God, Eye fid as You instructed me too. (fid?)
Please son don't you cry. (comma after 'son')
God are you listening yo my prayers? (comma after 'God' and 'listening to')
I've been doing this now for 7,355 daya! (days)
...
It's okay Jay. (comma after 'okay')
Simmrr fown. ('Simmer' & 'down')
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Never had a chance to finish.
Taking buses and riding bikes to three churches.
Tends to do that to your completing.
But now, as well as God knows.
Thanks,
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
We question someone's fickle behaviour and a disturbed mind can obliterate a life in an instant and we are left wondering why, and the grief of it can resonate forever for those left behind, a poignant write Ricky, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
We question someone's fickle behaviour and a disturbed mind can obliterate a life in an instant and we are left wondering why, and the grief of it can resonate forever for those left behind, a poignant write Ricky, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Much appreciated stoping by Sunday
Enjoy Gods Special day anf pray.
Amen.
Doctor Ricky
Comment from Jessica Wheeler
I was truly MOVED by this message. A journey of self-reflection; it encourages us to give to those less fortunate- or provide their fortune if perhaps we become less fortunate. This message of hope is so important, especially in today's world where it can be easy to feel defeated. There is no greater gift, than of life from an organ donor. Xoxox
Jessica
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
I was truly MOVED by this message. A journey of self-reflection; it encourages us to give to those less fortunate- or provide their fortune if perhaps we become less fortunate. This message of hope is so important, especially in today's world where it can be easy to feel defeated. There is no greater gift, than of life from an organ donor. Xoxox
Jessica
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Thanks Jessica. It's nice when someone fully understands what you're presenting here.
Thanks for the great review!
Doctor Ricky