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More about the fun and joy of summer
2 total reviews
Comment from
kiwisteveh
A solid 5-7-5 poem unified by the triple rhyme and presenting a popular topic summer fun for young children.
There is a nice balance too, partly created by 'begun' in the first line and 'done' in the final one.
Good luck.
Steve
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
Thank you so much! I am glad that you found it enjoyable.
Comment from
Wendy G
Simple pleasures and fun in the sun. And a simple lifestyle and routine. You captured the fun in the image and in your words. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
Thank you so much for reviewing and for your best wishes. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.
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