Our Own Downfall
Contest entry2 total reviews
Comment from Nicki Nance
You captured the terrors of the masses in these few words. I like that you changed to a sarcastic font for your retort. The pensive AI guy in the graphic tells the final tail.
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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You captured the terrors of the masses in these few words. I like that you changed to a sarcastic font for your retort. The pensive AI guy in the graphic tells the final tail.
Comment Written 20-May-2023
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Thank you for the great review, Nicki. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you liked the piece. I was trying to make the last line look like the robot was speaking. Lol. Have a great rest of your weekend.
Comment from Mintybee
I like how your poem has two distinct parts, made clear by spacing and font. I know many people are concerned about the future of AI, and I think this visual and poem together summed up the concern succinctly. Your syllable count is spot on.
Mintybee
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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I like how your poem has two distinct parts, made clear by spacing and font. I know many people are concerned about the future of AI, and I think this visual and poem together summed up the concern succinctly. Your syllable count is spot on.
Mintybee
Comment Written 20-May-2023
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Thank you for the fantastic review and stars, Mintybee. I'm glad you liked this dark piece. Have a wonderful rest of your weekend.
