Comment from royowen

Excellent

Along with birds they are a major reason for proliferating plants as well giving that golden goodness of honey to our tables, I didn't know their origins were Asian, beautifully written dear friend, good luck, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 21-May-2023

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reply by the author on 21-May-2023

Thank you so much Roy.

reply by royowen on 21-May-2023

Most welcome

Comment from kiwisteveh

Excellent

The honey bee is a star! not the only insect that aids pollination of course, but surely the most important.

You perk up your wee poem with alliteration in each line. perhaps the first of these 'first farmer' is the most striking with its metaphorical description of the bee...

Steve

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 Comment Written 21-May-2023

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reply by the author on 21-May-2023

Thank you so much, Steve

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Love this nature write and bees are so very special, they are tenacious and hard workers and never fail in their duty, a fine presentation for the contest, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 21-May-2023

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reply by the author on 21-May-2023

Thank you so much, Dolly