Comment from Monica Chaddick

Excellent

This is a beautifully worded poem. I love how you used the colors for the various lines of your poem. The message was clear and easy to understand. Your piece flowed well, making for an easy read. Best of luck!

 Comment Written 20-May-2023

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reply by the author on 20-May-2023

Thanks!

Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet, you have you first vote.

There were many entries with blue and red but I think you offered the best examples.

I didn't know that for brides blue stands for loyalty and love.

I have never been to a wedding .

I like that you did the different coloured stanze , it is appealing.

 Comment Written 20-May-2023

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reply by the author on 20-May-2023

Thank you!

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

Excellent presentation - I like the way your text picks up the stripes of the flag. Your two colours fulfil the brief and your rhyming verse resonates with well -chosen examples of these colours. Good job. Thanks for sharing and good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 20-May-2023

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reply by the author on 20-May-2023

Welcome.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

An unusual write about the colours in your flag which you share with the UK and France, I enjoyed your analysis here, an inventive post, much enjoyed, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-May-2023

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reply by the author on 20-May-2023

Dolly, an unusual write? I wrote about different things.