Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao!

You now have 6 votes!

So you are saying:
being your better half , she made you a better man?

Being with her made you feel whole.

Made you feel alive.

You could talk to her about everything and she supported you.

She made you happy
She was patient with you
She was your rock
You felt lucky that she loved and cared for you
She made you want to be better
And spurred you forward because she believed in your potential.

Is that what you meant with :
she breathes life into my soul.

So now without her you are lost?

 Comment Written 22-May-2023

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reply by the author on 22-May-2023

All of that except the broken part. There is no broken part in this poem. Thank you for the vote and your in-depth review.

Comment from Regina Elliott

Excellent

Dear Poet, a very pretty flower
5-7-5 poem. This is a creative
poem of "her flower breathing
into your soul " My very
best wishes and regards for
the 5-7-5 competition. It's a
strong and worthy entry. ~

 Comment Written 20-May-2023

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reply by the author on 20-May-2023

Appreciate the kind review.

Comment from Debbie D'Arcy

Excellent

A very sweet and rather poignant verse personifying the flower as breathing life into a soul that will never be parted from the writer. Thanks for sharing this gentle, sensitive poem. Debbie

 Comment Written 20-May-2023

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reply by the author on 20-May-2023

Thank you Debbie.

Comment from Ginda Simpson

Excellent

What a lovely image you created using flower as symbol for purity. And purity within our souls will indeed blossom, as will love. Beautifully written.

 Comment Written 20-May-2023

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reply by the author on 20-May-2023

Thank you very much