Peace
Poem about a rose.3 total reviews
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Hello there again.
This is nice, but, if you're putting a period at the end of sun, you need to capitalize P in pink, and also M in my.
You need a lowercase p in peace.
pink, yellow, and white
petals taking in the sun.
my world is at Peace.
I'll fix your rating when it complies with contest.
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Hello there again.
This is nice, but, if you're putting a period at the end of sun, you need to capitalize P in pink, and also M in my.
You need a lowercase p in peace.
pink, yellow, and white
petals taking in the sun.
my world is at Peace.
I'll fix your rating when it complies with contest.
Comment Written 19-May-2023
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent haiku entry for the 5/7/5 flower contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Excellent haiku entry for the 5/7/5 flower contest.
I like the presentation too. Concrete images easy to visualize.
Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Gypsy
"Poetry heals the wounds inflicted by reason" -- Novalis
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Flowers have a tendency to make our world a peaceful and pleasant place to live and I enjoyed for few words about beautiful roses here that uplift the scene, especially when it is sunny, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Flowers have a tendency to make our world a peaceful and pleasant place to live and I enjoyed for few words about beautiful roses here that uplift the scene, especially when it is sunny, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-May-2023
reply by the author on 17-May-2023
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Thank you for your review.
