My Notes From Above The Ground.
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "My Uncertain Future."A collection of episods of a Homeless Woman.
2 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
"My Uncertain Future" was well written, rich, in Theme and imagery.
It also red well flowed well with absolutely no grammar issues.
Thanks for sharing and have a great May day.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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"My Uncertain Future" was well written, rich, in Theme and imagery.
It also red well flowed well with absolutely no grammar issues.
Thanks for sharing and have a great May day.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 23-May-2023
reply by the author on 23-May-2023
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Thanks Ricky. I am improving writing skills with the help of reviews like yours. I hope you will read previous chapters also. My thanks and best wishes.
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Things get no better as the return to Pappy at the trailer Park turns out to shed another loss in her life. No-one had informed her of his demise and now she is completely alone in this so poignant story of her overwhelming sense of isolation and not belonging. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Things get no better as the return to Pappy at the trailer Park turns out to shed another loss in her life. No-one had informed her of his demise and now she is completely alone in this so poignant story of her overwhelming sense of isolation and not belonging. Thanks for sharing. Debbie
Comment Written 21-May-2023
reply by the author on 21-May-2023
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Debbie: I appreciate your comments and they help me in developing the story in a way of understanding how this story could work to bring the plights of our vulnerable segment in front of the readers and then, in front of our society. I thank you on behalf of all such individuals. My best wishes and regards.
Arun
