Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful 5-7-5 poem about the beautiful lillies' and the sunflower. I love just about any type of flower. Comparing the lillies to be as fresh as a new borns skin is good too. I had twin boys and one other boy. So I can truly relate to your words. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 17-May-2023

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reply by the author on 18-May-2023

Hi Teri, thanks for your comments and review.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Hello author. This is a lovely 5/7/5 poem about a flower. Yes new born babies smell lovely.

Just one thing is that you will need to choose one flower, as you now have sun-flowers and lilies, as the contest requires or you will be disqualified.

An easy edit I am sure, so best wishes to you with the voters. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 16-May-2023

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reply by the author on 18-May-2023

Hi Gloria, thanks for your comments and review.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, and your
notes are appreciated.
-Effective imagery and comparison
create a good word picture of the lilies.
-A very good closing line.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-May-2023

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reply by the author on 16-May-2023

Dear Pam, thank you for your comments and review.

reply by Pam (respa) on 16-May-2023

You are welcome.