Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very lovely and very well written 5-7-5 poem you have penned about the white roses and snow in June. You used very good words and very good imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 17-May-2023

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reply by the author on 18-May-2023

Thank you so much, Teri,
this is so kind of you. Many
blessings to you.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice image and presentation.
-The syllable count is good, and
your notes are appreciated.
-Effective imagery and alliteration.
-A good comparison to "ballet beauties."
-A very good closing line.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 16-May-2023

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reply by the author on 16-May-2023

Thank you so much, Pam.
I appreciate your kind review
and the 5 stars. I hope you
have a blessed rest of the
week. ~

reply by Pam (respa) on 17-May-2023

You are very welcome and you have a good rest of your week, as well.